Birth of Sin

Birth of Sin

A Poem by Kaliou

Marble staircases,

Tarnished red by the immaculate birth of lust,

The twelve disciples turned a deaf eye,

And a blind ear.

 

Violent intrusion trickled through cracked innocence.

Ardent whispers enticed perversion,

Bondage and Discipline,

Dominance,

 

Submission.

 

What’s your safe word?

 

 

 

 

 

© 2011 Kaliou


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always an interesting subject

Posted 13 Years Ago


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TJ
The imagery here is amazing. Very dark, very sensuous. It's brutal but at the same time pleasurable

Posted 13 Years Ago


My safe word: I don't know...

But, the imagery here is dark, blasphemous, disturbing

But, I guess there is a love, a real love, found between the agents in the dominant-submissive paradigm.

Maybe that's why we have a religious impulse after all.

Great work, I think.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Kaliou
Kaliou

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