Birth of Sin

Marble staircases,

Tarnished red by the immaculate birth of lust,

The twelve disciples turned a deaf eye,

And a blind ear.

 

Violent intrusion trickled through cracked innocence.

Ardent whispers enticed perversion,

Bondage and Discipline,

Dominance,

 

Submission.

 

What’s your safe word?

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[The fallen of innocence]

wow.........it's filled with depth, good job ^^

[Omar]

Haunting ending. I like the flow and how it started with a quick tempo then slowed down to a trickle before the bomb drops at the end. Good job

[Ruth]

The code word.......such depths in this piece.....you write with such depths.....all infused here in minimal words, sublime! xx

[Babieegirl]

"The twelve disciples turned a deaf eye,
And a blind ear." That was a great part in the poem, my safe word? i'd have to think about that.

[Allen Smuckler]

love
all else pales in comparison...without it...nothing else matters
with it...we all have a chance...
good write, Kaliou
allen

[Max]

Good imagery :D I also like the deaf eye/blind ear idea.
Rather provocative.

Safe word? Hmm... probably something along the lines of "stop!" :P

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Mine is The Light.

[hannahjchin]

very provocative

[Alicia Hirshey]

What an interesting subject.