Painted Pearls

more inspired by my dream

 She's an average kind of girl

In a world painted in self esteem

The paint is so white and so pure

She gets everything

 

Everyone knows she's beautiful

Without and within

Holding roses and posing for ladies

On the plank where she's found waiting

 

We could do this

It was a romance affair

That night she lay in bed in another world

She was a ballet bank robber

 

In the clouds they stare

Up the endless hotel lights

It was an unusual dream

And it was never just a casual night

But a night laced with sorrow

For things she can't remember

 

Digital dysphoria

And panic at the disco

She can't remember

She can't think it over

But you were somewhere within

The apple painted walls

 

Dancing delirium

In the white washed malls

With liqour polished shoes

In a neverending play

Of things she remembers

And the things she cannot say.

 

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

this is good...I like it a lot.. magic

[East of Eden]

i think this reads like a song. i imagined the beat behind it n everything. you've created such an intriguing character that inhabits your dream. very interesting i really like it.

[SamBug]

I liked it a lot. good job. keep writing forever and ever okay. Thanks for allowing me to read this. It had great emotion and a perfect meter stance.