Concept and Misconcepts

In a world which changes more frequently than seasons, what should a person's perspective be like?

The world was flat a long time ago,
Until it was shown wrong long ago.
It takes time creating concepts
alas! so do creating misconcepts.

Again and again we die and live,
Perhaps there's charm in reel dive.
Assumptions give dire directions new,
Many are true and otherwise the few.

Novel thoughts all beings must see,
Cross the mayhem of rivers and sea,
Finding concepts and giving misconcepts strife,
Knowledge and wisdom makes a fairy tale life.

The windows are open forever and ever,
See outside your pulses and explore that's been seen never,
New concepts will come for very sure ,
With no misconcepts you'll have no endure.

Reviews

[¿]

Another amazing!!...this reminds me a saying "While living life, if you can't find the true guide for yourself....then you should become that...if not for everyone be that for few"
Your poem's concept has something to learn from, thanks for sharing☺!! I like your prospective☺

[Samuel]

Thank you for the thoughtful review.

[¿]

You're heartedly welcome😊!

[Pooja Chintamani]

This is feeding reality .. everyone when facing new world gets wrong before right things .very nicely catched

[Samuel]

Thank you for reviewing this poem. I'm glad that you liked the idea portrayed.

[Akash gaikwad]

It's interesting how you have pulled some topic in the poem....I did a project in college where I tried to show how myths are stereotype because of science... Where else everything in this world is story..a mere story of agreed illusions. Again this is very argumentive point to talk upon...but the point is exploring your mind and evolving from all the misconcepts and concepts... Thank you this is an interesting poem...

[Samuel]

Thank you for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Eve]

I really like how contradictory this poem is with itself. I mean it begins with a negative outlook on how the human race develops its ideas, or concepts, as you state. There's one thing that I don't exactly like, and I don't really think your poem needs it. When you say the word, "Allas!" It changes the atmosphere of the poem and dampens what you are trying to do with it. You also don't start the poem with rhymes, so when you switch to that form of poetry it sets off the poem a bit. To really have an affect on your readers, I've noticed it's better to stick to a certain form of poetry. It also helps the flow of the poem, then your readers can also know how they are supposed to read the piece. I would like to conclude with this; I really think we should have a conversation sometime. I love how you look at your surroundings and just the world in general. I think we have a lot of the same ideas and thoughts. I really hope you accept my friend request so we can talk about other ideas and obviously, writing.

[Samuel]

Thank you so much for the review. It was overwhelming in a positive way.