Thats How He'd Do It.

"Slice her throat open"
Thats how he loved her.
Thats how he showed her the way.

"Rip out her insides"
Thats what he wanted.
Thats how he'd make his pay.

"Bring me her eyes"
With sadness inside.
Thats how he'd find his way.

"Cut off her legs"
Thats how he'd walk.
Thats how he'd get away.

"F**k, its the cops"
Thats how they found him.
Surely he didn't know,
She was a robot,
Simply for show.

Reviews

[Plexiglass]

This is an awesome poem. I like the format and the repetition. It had a very good tone to it as well, nice and dark and it didn't really hold back at all. My only complaint is with the last stanza, specifically the first line of the last stanza. I have no problem with him getting caught by the cops but just the way that line is phrased kind of makes him sound like an avg. street thug and it undid a lot of the evil you worked into his characterization earlier.

[Comedy Is No Fool]

I Loved This! Its Like A Deep Insight Of A TRUE psychopath and homicidal maniac. It shows the obvious construction of what is imorall and gruesome, but then you show us HIS sight of the matter and how in HIS mind this is just how to be romantic and declare his emotion of love...

I Loved This! Great Creativity and Outlook...