Slapzilla!

Slapzilla!

A Poem by Ariel B.
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Ariel + sleep deprivation + too many old funk records = poems about Bootsy Collins (!).

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Slap - 

Pop - 

Snap it into lockdown:

Get down

                 Lay down

Track it where it’s going down.


Hit it up

              Heat it up

Spit it out

                 Beat it up

Kick it out

                  Cut it out

Try it on, don’t wear it out.

 

One, two, three, four,

Kick it up one more - 

Five, six, seven, eight,

Snap it like it’s running late.

Bring it up to nine (nine),

Pay it like a fine (fine);

Hold it down and call it Zen.

When you get to ten (ten),

Slap it!

 

© 2011 Ariel B.


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o yeah
sweet beat on this here piece
for some reason i kept thinking of that elvis costello song...
nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

funk-i-delic fun , who could sleep with this going on ?!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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haha *snapping fingers* oh you got the beat here! don't fight the sleep when it produces rhythms like this - this beat's alive!! ha nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

my soul is doing a fierce double dutch hum to this treasure!!!~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fellin this one as a bass player..... feel it slide into the groove

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Ariel B.
Ariel B.

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