Opium

She takes off her dress,

satin straps slipping slow

over smooth shoulders painted

with lipstick like burns:

cigarette kiss

glowing darkly narcotic -

red satin slips dizzily - 

field of red poppies

bloom petal caresses

on skin like white silk.

Reviews

[roy mccarthy]

i like this,
feels like opium reading it,
nice and smooth!

[Sweet Emotions]

I'm a little confused. Is this about a sexy girl, or a powerful drug addiction?

[Aidz]

Lovin this.... beautiful imagry

[Robin]

dark and smokey , the red a sharp contrast that quickens the heartbeat and widens the pupils , easing into the gentleness of white silk