This is a very nice piece.
I think a similar thing a lot of times but what I really like is the undertone of melancholy in this.
Whenever I read about something like this, I expect fury, anger, rage. But your text is calm, calm enough to be taken home, calm enough to just think about, without having to argue.
I like that.
Your choice of words is great for the circumstances; nothing big or too fancy. Just as real as the situation itself.
Posted 4 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
This was my first posted poem, and you just gave me my first ever review - thanks Kratos! I apprecia.. read moreThis was my first posted poem, and you just gave me my first ever review - thanks Kratos! I appreciate the review, and even more so, the content of the review. Thanks!
This hopefully made a lot of people think. I think you have the stuff of dreamscapes; maybe your calm and unique intellect is already changing the world. This piece is beauty and tragedy.
This is a very nice piece.
I think a similar thing a lot of times but what I really like is the undertone of melancholy in this.
Whenever I read about something like this, I expect fury, anger, rage. But your text is calm, calm enough to be taken home, calm enough to just think about, without having to argue.
I like that.
Your choice of words is great for the circumstances; nothing big or too fancy. Just as real as the situation itself.
Posted 4 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
This was my first posted poem, and you just gave me my first ever review - thanks Kratos! I apprecia.. read moreThis was my first posted poem, and you just gave me my first ever review - thanks Kratos! I appreciate the review, and even more so, the content of the review. Thanks!