Not Alone I Feel this Pain

Golden.

I see gold around me. Writing me and keeping me insane,

committing me, not admitting my asylum from the storm that's all around me,

and forces me to ask what kind of gold of nature is

merciless enough to bring this kind of metal death into

a house and day that bears its contents only selflessly,

what kind of golden trap years this much to enslave its contents selfishly and

admit them to asylum far away from any golden strands of

bliss or remnants of nature's seeming salvation and

unapparent death of what should have been a love too powerful

to diverge, a golden love of gold which writes its contents onwards until

one may try and fail an apology of words,

words that are as golden as dirt and meaningful as some

golden trap too powerful too diverge, like a sea of

gold beneath a selfless ark

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Minor edits are needed , but i liked it.

[Zach W]

My favorite line was 'writing me and keeping me sane'. I like the phrasing, don't know why.

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Simply golden ^_^ An interesting read.