Time, Inevitable

Time, Inevitable

A Poem by Different Wings
"

Just thinking about it

"
Taunting
your fire
Haunting
desire
Relinquishing
pains
Accepting the
chains
Passing
in motion
Trying
the ocean
Ignoring
the tide
There's nowhere
to hide
Your book
full of pages
Your stance
void of stages
Consuming
the test
No worse is
no best
When one tries
to see
Abide, for
you're free!

© 2011 Different Wings


Author's Note

Different Wings
Down to the last syllable... dare you to find a mistake!

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Simple and wonderful. You should consider reading this for TNC! Impressive with the rhythm. I did try to find a mistake... :) There wasn't one to be found.
I feel as though I lost the thread towards the end. Everything was connecting, like I was following a string of dots, and then at "your stance" I got off beat. I'm not sure why. I'd love to talk to you about this sometime!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Simple and wonderful. You should consider reading this for TNC! Impressive with the rhythm. I did try to find a mistake... :) There wasn't one to be found.
I feel as though I lost the thread towards the end. Everything was connecting, like I was following a string of dots, and then at "your stance" I got off beat. I'm not sure why. I'd love to talk to you about this sometime!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful

Posted 13 Years Ago

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