Lost

Just a lil sum'n sum'n lol

Im in darkness,

What is this place?

I look left,

Nothing.

I look right,

Nothing.

Voices,

Love, Hate, Fear, Life, Death...

Names,

Who's name?

No,

My name.

What do you want from me?

Screaming,

Fear flooding over me.

Anxiety,

Help!

Violence, Death, Drugs,

Friendship,

Memories,

Why are you showing me this?!

Where am I?

Who am I?

What am I?

I'm lost...

I scream but no one hears me.

I'm trapped in my own insanity.

Or am I sane?

Am I alive or am I dead?

Do I even exist?

Why?

How?

I'm so confused.

I'm blind!

Or can I see?

I open my eyes...

Who are you?

SHe kisses me on the forehead.

Mother?

Figures surround me.

Sisters?

Whats going on?

Where am I?

A hospital?

Why?

Oh.

Don't cry.

Please?

She can't hear me.

I can see myself below me.

Im dead.

Or am I?

In a coma.

Not wanting to wake up.

Get up.

Wake up.

Dont make them suffer anymore.

Wake up.

The monitor beeps.

I open my eyes to reality,

Or is it a dream?

No, Reality.

Mother,

I'm fine.

Sisters,

I'm okay.

Please stop crying.

I love you...

Author's Note

Ive never been in a coma or even hospitalized.
this just popped into my head.
ok?

Reviews

[nightmask]

This sounds like the episodes the prophecy and nevermore combined with other thoughts it's very cool to read I can understand the confusion and I like how it changes like it's sort of a dream and she can't control it

[JacJak]

I like the short lines because it allowed me (I don't know about anyone else obviously) to read the poem quickly and it made me rush to get to the end to see what was going to happen. I'd say its a good take for just "popping in you head." I like it. Had a few typos...But the message got across nicely.