Hello

I couldn't help but notice

your breathing.

"Hello."

I couldn't help but notice

your staring.

"Hi..."

 

Two innocence,

warped in a hole they'll never climb out.

"Hello darling."

I couldn't help but notice

your love.

"Hello sweetheart"

 

Day by day you watch as she waits

for you patiently,

to walk into her arms.

"Hello."

"Hi."

But where was he?

I couldn't help but notice

your smell.

It burns her noise,

because its not hers.

 

I couldn't help but notice

her eyes water.

"I'm sorry."

Sorry was never good enough for

the already damaged.

 

It's always your favorite sin

that can do you in.

Reviews

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

"its always your favorite sin that can do you in" So very true...ughh these are words that i think hit home with everyone. Well done.

[Sean Rada complete droc..]

so i take it u guys arent back together yet? and good poem

[Daydreamer54]

I like the last sentence and it's so true. for some reason this reminds me of a titile of a song called. "you had me at hello." :P