Realm

what the world really is. How everyone gets treated. and how we all will one day get reedeemed by the redeemer.

I'm trapped in a realm were secrets don't mean a thing.

A place so much more then a sanctum,

you don't have to keep secrets.

 

The heads will role in the anxiety of your impure

and selfish attempts,

in destroying me.

Trying obliviously to tear me down,

to shatter my inner core,

and tease my balanced energy into a liquid grease.

 

I grimace at the thought of what's behind closed doors.

Shriek at the crys of those who don't know secrets.

In this realm,

there are no secrets.

 

For the legend that has been fortold,

will go on.

To never die,

with ambition, hope...

Life.

To shed light upon the wicked,

and leave the wretched to regain stength.

 

I will explain once more;

In the destruction of my anxiety,

my energy will liquify into an unhearty wretched place,

where souls aren't found.

They shrivel in the essence of light,

pruning to the radience.

I fall to my knees,

head low.

Being hollowed out in the night and trechery.

For behind my closed doors,

in the realm that I am living,

I seek to find my redemption.

Author's Note

In your "realm" you try to be so much more then whats set in your furture. You dont have to be 'perfect' because there is no such thing as perfect in this ugly ditraught unhabbitant world. Be who you are and what you want to be. Becaue in reality there are no second chance.
Review please and thank you (:

Reviews

[patricia]

This was a very good poem, well expressed and thought provoking...

A few spelling mistakes...(were perhaps should read...Where)
(destrooying should read destroying)
(balenced...should read balanced)
(exsplain...should read explain)
(my energy will liquify)
(treachery)

I realy enjoyed reading your work, you are very talented. Thankyou

[0_o Abbie]

I have to laugh but not at your poem, just because the lady who corrected all your spelling made several of her own. :D ha ha. Such as "realy" should be really, and "thankyou" should be thank you. ha ha. So funny. :D

Anyways about your poem. I LOVED it. Very true. :D