Fifty-Two, Til' Then

Castles and car crashes

Burn like sweet cigarettes

Bending the blinds

To see what washes

in the tides

Not blind to see your

Luminous face

Brightening and our 

sweet embrace

And the colors melt 

off the walls

To see the anguishing life

at a pause

While you are gone

Deaf to thine lips

to the liquor that puckers 

our kiss

Sheltered out society

til thy loves heart has 

full purity

Time is gold

Til time sets still my heart is

yours to hold

Cards at fifty-two

something bitter

than something blue

As chests race

Your love starts to pace

Pretty in white

Til' 'once upon a time'

Ti'l then

Til the strife burns down,

it will be brief fifty-two til the

End.

Reviews

[Rees Thomas]

Yeah you got this s**t. Gritty Romance

[Kala Benfield]

Thank you honey! Means alot. I like the gritty ugly side of Romances. It makes love look more real.

[Rees Thomas]

yeah its good you should read my stuff :)

[Kala Benfield]

Im doing so right now.

[UndeadWill]

Well done. I can't really say I have anything to add other than well done.

[Kala Benfield]

Thank you !

[UndeadWill]

I will review in detail later