Whisper

A poem i wrote sometime last year and just found on my computer.

　

I see you sitting all alone

I sit beside you

And then hear you groan.

I lift up your head and saw the water rising

I wipe away a tear

And tell you there‘s no shame in crying.

I look down and stare at your arms

And what I saw there

Made me feel a little alarmed.

Cuts scattered your arms in many different patterns

I look back into your face

And tell you that none of those matter.

I lean down and press my lips to your ear

And then I whisper with much passion

“I’ll love you always and forever, my dear.”

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Numb]

That was such an interesting poem to read.
I haven't read any of your work, and I came onto your name from a read-request one of my friends sent me. I can't quite find the words to really describe this poem, which makes me happy--cause you've pretty much left me speechless--but upset because--yet again--I can't find words that aren't inadequate.
I'm very happy my friend recommended me this.
~N~

[revenant21]

Great work! A very good poem. I loved it!

[Kayla W.]

awesome poem!

[Dinesh Sairam]

"And tell you there‘s no shame in crying"

"I lean down and press my lips to your ear
And then I whisper with much passion"

Truly sweet! Whoever this poem was directed to, must have fainted after reading this (Out of ecstasy of course..)! Keep writing!

[Fantasia Allmighty]

This is a really good poem. I just have one question. This person who sat down beside her what is the relation between them? How are they related?

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

nice poem sweet

[Daydreamer54]

aw, this was so sweet! I loved it!

[A.Lee]

Wow... excellent excellent piece. I felt like you could have snatched this right out of my head. Beautiful work. Going in my favorites.

[Dupree]

wow lil bro... it's good not too great but good