Whisper

A poem i wrote sometime last year and just found on my computer.

　

I see you sitting all alone

I sit beside you

And then hear you groan.

I lift up your head and saw the water rising

I wipe away a tear

And tell you there‘s no shame in crying.

I look down and stare at your arms

And what I saw there

Made me feel a little alarmed.

Cuts scattered your arms in many different patterns

I look back into your face

And tell you that none of those matter.

I lean down and press my lips to your ear

And then I whisper with much passion

“I’ll love you always and forever, my dear.”

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Numb]

That was such an interesting poem to read.
I haven't read any of your work, and I came onto your name from a read-request one of my friends sent me. I can't quite find the words to really describe this poem, which makes me happy--cause you've pretty much left me speechless--but upset because--yet again--I can't find words that aren't inadequate.
I'm very happy my friend recommended me this.
~N~

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

Very.....(I can't think of words)....original...I liked it!

[azlamalo]

well captured...

[Ruth]

Touching and yet sad too:)
A beautiful poem that leaves the reader thinking of the emotions!
Awesome work!
xx

[J.M]

very beautiful as well as sad - you can really feel the acceptance and unconditional love in this poem. Well done.

[floarealbastra10]

very sad, i liked it

[Ghost]

wonderful, dearest. ((: good job.

[Albatross]

Short, sweet, and simple.. reminds me of a small moment carried in a memory, even if it's written in the present tense. This is such a sad experience, save fore the part where you wrote "I'll love you always and forever, my dear." Beautiful poem..

[SamBug]

This was sweet. I liked it.

[Faye]

It's a very interesting mix of grim and love.

[Indecisive and Loving I..]

This was amazing! Lovely little imagery, I must say :) I could picture this happening! NICE job, dude! I saw a little rhyme scheme going on. Nice job!
I loved this /wipes away a tear