Thrown It Away

I am hypnotized 
By your body
Lost in my own head
Everything about you
Is making me insane
But only in a good way
Your laugh keeps me in a trance
Your eyes show me the life we could have
If only I hadn't thrown it away

Reviews

[GTVile]

Its very emotional and strikes a good mix between impulses, lasting desires, the personal struggle and eventual collapse of love. Very real parts of most hard loves, as much as no one wants to admit it. A very mature perspective for your age. Good job.

[kill the innocents]

Your laugh keeps me in a trance ... this is good.. good job..

[Alicia_Skye]

Very well done, I like how you've used 'hypnotized' and 'trance' - love those words and if you feel like it with someone, even better. The ending's sad :(

[SilentLullabies]

I love the way this is written. I can feel the emotions.