Nice work. seemed very intensely written, tight as hell keeping the flow very engaging..deeper and deeper into the dark of the world you created in the piece. Loved it
Cheers! keep at it :)
Ominous words especially to one young. To embrace the dark is to prepare for the unknown. One can only hope the human intellect is sufficient enough for the task ahead.
This is terrific, and true everyone will engage in darkness, but is our choice to
embrace it and fight through, key word for me in this piece is "pray". Thanks for sharing and b-blessed.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you! This poem is the product of me lying awake at night and thinking up these crazy stories a.. read moreThank you! This poem is the product of me lying awake at night and thinking up these crazy stories about heroes and monsters, and monsters without heroes. Sometimes you have to fight for yourself. My brain is a jumble of these kinds of things.
Just turned 18 so everything is kind of willy wonka right now.... basically life is happening and I cant fit under my bed anymore to hide from it...Being an adult sucks more..