It feel's like tonight

this is about me and this wonderful person but we got in a fight everything didnt turn out right

     THIS FEEL'S LIKE TONIGHT..

I tryed to do everything but selfish is the word that come's out of your mouth..It felt like tonight I'm broken inside..Nothing matters because all I care about is you..I know what I want and all I want is you..I tryed to make it up to you but thats what you needed to do..It feel's like tonight.

Reviews

[Jules]

It is a very pain stricken poem and it portrays effectively the feelings of longing, love, separation, loneliness...At least thats what I feel. One thing is that the poem itself needs a bit more work put into it. in the sense that it could be longer and more developed and an even stronger emphasis of all these powerful emotions. Quite Good!! and I like the title...: )