Just Like That

"Truth or dare?" I say in a jokingly way.

"Dare."

"I dare you to break up with your girlfriend

"And I dare you to kiss Kaitlyn."

"NOOO!" I shout.

 

Just like that

The shy timid lttle girl

Comes out.

The little girl

Scared to kiss .

 

Just like that

I want your more

Aggressive side.

 

Just like that

I want you

To shut me up with

Just one simple kiss.

Reviews

[Chris]

"Truth or Dare..."

Dare -
she had a clue
about how she felt
really...FELT -
when her 'secret-dream'
was suddenly THERE...

Truth -
and there wasn't a even a hole
to fall in and pull the world over
to hide her heart anymore.

As her eyes filled
life paused between heartbeats...

Chris

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I like how you can feel the emotions behind your words. It seems like it is written from the heart, and I always enjoy that in a poem. I did think the flow was a little strange, except for the last stanza. I also didn't understand the first stanza. It seemed like the narrator said the third and fourth lines, so the last line would have been spoken by a guy, but instead it said "I shout." How is the narrator saying everything in that stanza except for line 2?

[SilentLullabies]

He's an idiot for not doing it. Very nice poem Kait :)