Butterfly Girl

3/1/2011

Butterfly girl

Butterfly girl

 

Open up

Those huge

Beautiful wings

 

Butterfly girl

Butterfly girl

 

Lift your head up

Off your knees

 

Butterfly girl

Butterfly girl

 

Wipe those

Teary eyes

 

Butterfly girl

Butterfly girl

 

Sing to me

In that soft

Cheerful voice

 

Butterfly girl

Butterfly girl

 

Please don’t

Be sad

 

Butterfly girl

Butterfly girl

 

Let this world

See a bright shining

Soul

 

And not this sad little girl

Crying all alone

 

Butterfly girl

Butterfly girl

 

Don’t you see

This life is yours

For the taking

 

Butterfly girl

Butterfly girl

 

Don’t you know?

The ones who make you sad

Are the ones that want to be like you

 

Butterfly girl

Butterfly girl

Reviews

[CookieMonster♥&h..]

i really enjoyed this its really good

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Awww A touching poem with a simple yet effective concept I really enjoyed the repetition of this poem another great write thank you for sharing

100/100

[Shiningwolf]

Very uplifting tone in this. I like it :)

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

this is good. i liked it

[Apathy To Empathy]

^^ I smiled at the end. The way you use your words in such power, it makes me see that there are people who can relate to this. Just amazing, hun! Just absolutely amazing!

[Cody Wiggins]

wow this is good. you go girl

[lovejulez03]

This is a good piece! Personally, I would probably take out a few of the "butterfly girl"s from different parts and at the very end. But "the ones who make you sad are the ones that want to be like you" is such a powerful verse. Good read!