Te Amo

one of my crappy poems

How can we change this?

How can we make it right?

How can darkness suddenly turn to light?

 

Why don't you want to be with me?

Why don't we repair all the broken bridges?

Why don't you just get over it and kiss me already?

 

What did I do that made you want me?

What did you say that made me so mad?

What did I say that I regret?

 

I am still good enough?

I am still what you want?

I am falling in love with you?

 

So many questions

So many answers

So many thoughts

 

The only thing

I have left

To say is

 

Te Amo!

Tu es mi amor!

Tu tienes mi corazon!

Author's Note

"Te Amo!
Tu es mi amor!
Tu tienes mi corazon!"

Transaltion: I love you
You are my love
You have my heart

Reviews

[Niko]

Wow, that's just awesome... I love the repetition between the lines in its presentation, and it conveys something we've all wanted to ask and say to someone... so thanks for writing this and sharing it with us!

[Forrest Ray]

again and again, ur poems just cut right into my very core, miss-communication is the worst f*****g thing there is. lost in translation, the Spanish really raps everything together so very much, the whole things just brings a montage of memories and emotions up thx u very much for birthing this into the world. synchronicity is in definite effect here

[Jim Parson]

Nicely done, Kaitlyn. You've captured the essence of longing and regret really well. I like the style as well, each line a question, each stanza beginning the same. Good job!