Don't let me love.

I have no clue why I wrote this years ago but... I just thought it was kinda true... Yes it ain't very good, an sorry both that.. Just give me your honest reviews... Note it is bout 2 years old, so...

My hearts aching,
Its fluttering an racing,
It's skipping beats, 
Its breaking an dying...
This is how love feels?
If it is then please...
Pull a trigger an show me that you care...
Kick me when your down...
I don't mind..
Just please, don't let this feeling control me...
I've been down that road,
Time an time again..
Always leading to a dead end or a loop, back around...
I don't want much,
I'm a simple girl,
I just want to love an..
for once..
Be loved back..
I don't want to fall head over heels again, 
or even a friendship turned love again,
I just wanna glide in,
take a seat,
an enjoy the ride til we die,
So please if you care,
kick me when your down,
pull the gun out an c**k it,
point it to my head an pop it,
grab a pillow an hold on tight,
a lil flame an gasoline,

to spark a light,
Anything would be better then this rollercoaster,
all its twists an turns,
loops an corkscrew,
the thrill then fall,
Just get me off this coaster,
I'm going to be sick,
I can't take this game called love anymore...
its hurt me,
stomped me to the ground,
kicked my a*s to bits,
 then came from more rounds,
Pleasee,
If you truely care as you say,
save the talk for someone else,
I just want a lil spark,
a fling then poof, all gone,
Just please,
say this one lil thing then be on your way,
Love Ain't Real. 
Its an illusion an delusion, 
its a game that has too many players,
and too many cheats.
So please,
I beg of thy,
just kick me when your down,
kiss me when your high,
stab me in the back,
let me live free,
don't trap me in that cage,
I can't be controlled by it anymore. 
I'll lose my mind,
pull my heart out,
an just stomped on it.
So please...
Tell me when this horror movies over,
wake me when the players all game an one remains.
So please,
Heart listen to my head for once,
Don't let me love.

Reviews

[rosemary keogh]

Ah that is amazing so heartfelt.

[~FALL3N-ANG3L~]

Thank you.

[wunfinfela]

Ok --- I wont love you so dont you do it either.
Just lay your tender body close to mine.
Fpr tje gppd life .....
Tell me that you don`t love me one last time and
lay your tender body close to mine
'For the good life....
----- Wunfinfela

[~FALL3N-ANG3L~]

for* gone from the game*