I just can't love you back.

Lyrics by a song, but my own personal twist of things.

I can love you each day,

I can love you everyday. 

I can love everything you do,

I can love the things you say. 

I can love you with everything,

I can love you with all my heart.

I can love you every second,

I can love you every minute.

I can love the way you smile,

I can love everything you wear.

I can love you til pigs fly,

I can love you til angels fall.

I can love you til the sun comes up,

I can love you til the moon goes down. 

I can love the way you laugh,

I can love the way your voice squeaks.

I can love anything about you,

I can love everything an then some.

But I just can't love you back, 

I just can't love you back. 

I know its hard to,

I know its not you. 

I know its different with you, 

I know our bond we have. 

But, baby.

I just can't love you back. 

Maybe its our history,

Maybe its our fights. 

Maybe its how your so cute when,

Maybe its how you get so mad. 

I could love you with all my heart,

I could love you with all my mind. 

But the hardest part is,

I just can't love you right back. 

I love you like crazy, 

I love you like a madman.

I love you like its nothing,

I love you like its natural. 

But that's the hardest part,

I just can't love you right back.. 

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Confusing ... that's why it fits so well with a confuising feeling like "love" and to a way of writing like the "flow of thoughts". The poem has pathos, largely made by the anaphoras, the metrica is amazing, that was a pleasant reading :)

[~FALL3N-ANG3L~]

Well, thank you very much for the review an thoughts. I'm glad you liked it.

[外人 (Gaijin)]

you're welcome :)