Stay Closed

Avalanches of self discovery fill your mind
and you fall farther than where you stood.
Thoughts and intrusions on your mind,
your dreams become filled with hatred.
And though the crow still crows at dusk,
its feathers are falling to the ground -
And you're left with only yourself
and it takes over better judgment
and you see the thoughts that were always in you head.

Author's Note

Sorry for any spelling mistakes that were in the poem before, I know that takes away from the poem itself.

Reviews

[Legion]

Okay, let's get the technical stuff out of the way. A lot of spelling errors. Get yourself a dictionary and look everything up.
Now that that is aside, this is a great poem with its concept. I found it imaginative and very captivating. I have to give you two thumbs up for that. Brilliant.

[Tears Forgotten]

Nice, extremly so... It conveys thoughts of the mind and simple truth in a very unique style.. amazing.. keep it up....

[S.S.P.]

very nice, clearly executed and well written :)