Goodbye

Longing Love

I was talking with the wind as you slowly nuzzle your nose on my neck

It was a sweet seduction which I couldn’t get enough with

Your arms around my waist

Your lips on my shoulder

Trying to erase fear that surrounding us

And yet that wasn’t enough

Each touch and each whisper of I love you’s,

Were just spell that keep on bounding

The clasp of our hands the peck of kiss you planted and the inch separating our lips

Now I wonder Why would we have, to have an inch?

Then, the ticklish feeling of your fingers on my cheeks and ears

Wishing time wont end

Or steal time and separate our world with them

Another kiss on my forehead and it can dis-spell everything

Even our time together

My heart is trembling with an unknown reason

My hands are shaking

Just another minute or two

But time ticking to fast

Now I can hear you whisper

Good Bye

Reviews

[Ethan]

I like your subtle alliteration. Nicely done :)

[Kage]

Thank you so much :)