Part of My Short StoryA Story by Luke CowanThis is a small part of a short story that I am writing. Any tips would be great. Thanks in advance.Mary ran
faster than she ever had before. Turning down dark alleyways and jumping over
discarded item as she went. She could hear the thumping of heavy boots on the
ground and the jingle of the guards armour as they ran but the sound
was getting fainter by the second, until finally it disappeared
completely. Mary smiled, she was going to get away and her nightmare would
finally end. Coming out of another alleyway into a bustling street, she halting
her run for a second to take in her surroundings. A small entourage
of nobles was moving down the road from the city centre, blocking any
escape in that direction. Crashes and thuds indicating another brawl in a
tavern across the road. “All too common to the city in these dangerous
times.” Pondered Mary. “There she is!” came a cry from down the
street as a tall young man with long brown cascading hair and deeply-tanned
skin pointed Mary out to his comrade. The two men started pushing and shoving
their way through the crowd towards her. Spotting an alleyway on the opposite
side of the road, Mary continued moving with renewed purpose, her knew pursuers
where not hampered by any heavy armour and so would be able to move a lot
faster than the guards. Pushing people
out of the way as she went she entered an alley that was only wide enough for two people
to stand abreast. Mary kept her eyes on the ground placing her feet with
the uppermost care as she ran. To fall know would be the end of her. Bursting
out from the alley she didn't see the burly baker who stood in her way until it
was too late. The man’s freshly baked bread flew out of his
hand and across the road, as Mary flew straight into him, flinging her to
the ground with a resounding thud. The darkness started to flow over Mary until
it completely engulfed her, and she descended into the darkness again. The first
guard to the exit the alleyway nearly fell over the limb figure of Mary on the
ground. With a wide grin he grabbed the girl and threw her over his
shoulder. He started to dream of the riches he would receive from the king when
he delivered the fugitive. © 2015 Luke CowanAuthor's Note
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