Copper Expression

A quick one I wrote a long time ago... I fixed it up quite a bit, though. I really wish I knew someone who could play out some piano for me...

The love is not mutual 
Consent returned not there. 
Stop, please don't stare
What do I care?
This bitter patterns got me tripping up stairs
Are you, 
Still there? For me, when I 
Fall down.

A penny's not enough for my thoughts 
Watch the weight of the world drop, 
Falling, crash, let it break 
Shatter a b******s dreams. 

Not half bad, half mad now this is getting just sad. 
So listen up now. 

The weight of the world is on everyones shoulder
No relief yet 
No it only gets colder
Till we are crushed beneath its weight... 
Oh. 

That bitter patterns got me tripping up stairs... 
Tell me why this all has to end, 
My friend (fiend) 
Oh. 
Tell me why, 
Do bad things have to end? 
Its just something I can't comprehend... 
Half mad, this is getting just sad... 

Your still there. 
But please, do you care?

Author's Note

What do you think? Anything I could possibly change or any suggestions? I have much room for improvement...