Mess Up

Eh, kind of a ramble. It's bad but I'd like reviews please! Thanks...

I feel like I'm a mess up,
I don't know what's the best of me.
I fall back into mood again,
wishing I wouldn't exist.
You see,
the past can't be fixed,
and I can't stop the future from happening.
So I sit here thinking of what would happen if I could change the past,
man it would be blast.
Drama, drama,
I see it everyday.
I hate to be away,
drama just can't leave,
it stays.
Should I just sit here and bereave,
of the loss of all the people that meant the most to me.
I wish I could see what coming to me next,
but I'll just sit back and relax.

Reviews

[Ken Yen]

it's not bad at all, your work flows well. this make me think about what it like to ride a really big, fast roller coaster. the nerves draw draw you in and then they turn on you as you wish you'd never gotten on. but the ride will come to an end and you'll be looking for the next thrill before you know it.

i think you could have done some more with the ending but that isn't really a criticism just a desire. ramble on lady.