Hallows GraveA Story by KevinJCarterThis is a story I wrote mimicking Edgar Allen Poe's style of writing for my eleventh grade Advanced Literature class. It's about a man who is haunted by a vengeful spirit.Hallows Grave With quill and ink I make physical the events
that have transpired of late. The shrill
cries of the wind cut through the still quiet that has invaded my mind, as alone
I sit…candlelight reflecting solemn shadows along this now, barren room. They whisper of the inevitable omen that is
soon to befall this withered soul. No
sign of life remains; unless you could call what is left of myself…wait…there
is nothing left, only a faded image of a man, stricken with a fear that mere
words cannot begin to explain. I should take you back to when it all
began. Back to that dreadful hour,
forever branded into my dreams, that nightmarish hell that has visited me every
night since the encounter. All Hallows
Eve, late evening, I took a walk down a well deserted path. I should have known better than to tread down
that road, the signs were all around, but arrogant as I was I continued on, and
it is not till now, thinking back on that night, that I realize I was not alone. Continuing on, my footsteps echoing through
the still silence that enveloped all that was around, until I came to a tree
like no other I had seen before. Its
limbs twisted out like broken, knarled arms.
Its trunk was black and twisted to an extent that it was hard to even
say it was a trunk. In the background,
was nothing but the last fading glimpse of light as the sun laid its head to
rest. A chill, a chill so cold it could
freeze your soul, radiated from it. I
should have left then, but curiosity, being the masochistic tormenter that it
is, drew me to investigate this unnatural phenomenon. Oh! how my hands now shake, as this
reiteration awakens in me the fear I have tried so hard to contain. Walking forward, I pushed my hand forward,
brushing only the extreme edges of my fingertips across the bark, when all of a
sudden everything fell silent. The wind,
the insects, everything…silence, as if sound ceased to exist. My heart began to pace faster and
faster…thu-thump-thu-thump-thu-thump-thu-thump-thu-thump. A whisper…or simply a rustle of the
previously dormant wind…no it was definitely a whisper, brushed past my
ear. I froze, not even daring to disturb
the silence around me with my breath. Seconds
passed by…maybe minutes…or even hours?
I’m not so sure anymore, until as if nothing had even occurred, I could
hear the wind whistling in the nearby trees.
Still in shock, but completely conscious, I willed my feet to move, away
from the twisted tree that will forever scar my memories, until finally
reaching the solace of home, but now, I’m not so sure that Home is safe any longer… While writing, I’ve been noticing…changes in
the presence of this house. Where, once,
insects were singing outside the windowsill, now no melodies drift to my
ears. I’ve also heard whispers in the
corners, unintelligible rasps and mutterings.
They are no doubt mocking my fear.
Oh how foolish they are…They have never know fear like this,
debilitating, immobilizing fear that grips every fiber, ever thread of your
soul, until there is nothing else left that resembles a soul. Now…another day of woe befalls the corridors
of my mind, my second encounter with the bringer of my fear. It was early morn, the sun was still
cloaked in the blankets of night as I walked the, now well worn path, to the
ghastly tree of my nightmares. I have
named it Hallows Grave, for the fact that each time I am around it, I…sense
death, and the chill that it emits, is like the same numbness that I believe we
will all undoubtedly face when death has sheared the final threads of our
lives. I have come here often, to better
understand all that happened that dreadful day that transpired weeks ago, and
have begun to notice things, unnerving things that need much looking into. One: The earth around the tree seems to have
been disturbed lately, like someone…or something was trying to dig under the
tree. Two: I have found dead animals all
around the tree, all of which have had their hearts ripped out…(none of which I
have found). And Three, which is the
most disturbing of them all…There were…etchings in the bark of the tree, as if
someone took their fingernails and…scraped them along the tree. Oh how the thought sends shivers down my
spine!! And I can’t shake the feeling of
being followed. Each step, I feel, is
shadowed by some entity that insists on haunting me…and I’m beginning to think
that the two are related…. Oh how the deterioration of the mind
leaves room for madness to set in. I
have pondered long and hard on that which has largely disturbed me, the final
detail that I have collected at Hallows Grave, which may be the last that I
have a chance to acquire, for something has followed me to my home, since my
return from Hallows Grave. A creak,
disturbing the silence that only the scratch of my quill upon this paper
occupied, came from outside my door. My
hear has begun to race again, for the realization that what I found has become
true…Another creak, this time closer, then closer, then closer, and all I can
think about were the words I found, on my last trip to Hallows Grave. There, etched in the bark of the tree, hung
the words….I’m
Coming For You. © 2011 KevinJCarter |
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Added on June 3, 2011 Last Updated on June 3, 2011 AuthorKevinJCarterThomasville, GA, GeorgiaAboutI am eighteen years old and just graduated from high school. I love to write and think I am adequate when it comes to storytelling. I won second place in the Young Author's competition 2011 and that m.. more..Writing
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