ecstasy

He told me: “you are crazy” while biting my thighs.

“You are crazy”

-Through his teeth, just like my neck.-

“You are crazy”

-with a sigh-

“You are crazy”

-becoming a whimper-

“You are cra...”

-with my tongue intercepting syllables-

“zy”

-panting-

“You are crazy”

-like a polar bear in Miami-

“You are crazy”

-with haggard-moon eyes-

“ ”

-scratching the paralyzing ecstasy-

“You are crazy, woman”

-hugging the loneliness of my back-

“Are you crazy enough?”

-from the door, smiling, with outstretched hands- 

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Wow! I love your poem. It does two to tango in a crazy dance. I also enjoyed the presentation. Truly inspiring.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An interesting poem which once again leaves the reader to interpret the tableau. It feels a lot like an illicit tryst to me as the exploration is both enjoyed and yet described as 'crazy'.

[The Twin Arenas]

"haggard-moon eyes-"

love this. what a combination of words. could be a poem unto itself.