Take Control

Trapped within the depths of depression, I found myself picking up a pencil in hopes that someone could relate to what I was going through.

She's sick of being beaten and she is sick of being torn.
She's through with all this disrespect and all these smiles that she's worn.
She's done with getting stepped on, and she's ready for something new.
She needs something good, something to get her through.

She doesn't want to act this way, and she doesn't want to cry,
but she needs some understanding and some hope to get her by.
don't push her to the edge and don't give her reasons why,
because she's not afraid to do it, she knows it's all a lie.

She wants something better, she needs it in her life.
She is praying for a reason not to pick up the knife.
She wants that happy ending in her own special way,
but she sick of all the bruises that she receives through out the day.

She's sick of this trying and getting nothing in the end.
She's done with all this happiness she knows it's just pretend.
She done with being the strong one, just look her in they eye,
She's sick of barley living and just getting by.

You know she's past her breaking point, she wants anything but to try
give her some room to breath, give her a reason why.
Some one please do something better then wreck this poor girls soul
someone please take the reigns. someone take control.

Author's Note

Please ignore the grammar. My writing is more about what I am trying to convey to the reader, now whether or not the comma is in the correct place.

Reviews

[Good Times]

What an important message about abuse. An excellent piece. Thank you so much for sharing.

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully conveyed. The first poem of yours i read you said you were 14 when it was written.I'm guessing you're a little older now, but not so much as your words convey. You certainly have a mature reasoning of the story that life becomes. Exceptionally well written and portrayed.

[Kacee]

Well, I just got back into writing. I took a couple years off, so I've been trying to figure out how I did it when I was that young. Lol.

[Mz]

A feeling many in the world share I'm sure but few that have managed to convey it so beautifully. Fabulous writing, a picture to the soul.
Thank you.

[Kacee]

No, thank you for taking the time to read it.

[Brittany]

I gotcha. :-) I think on this site you'll find lots of folks you cope by writing and you will fit right in! I think this was well written. I liked your phrasing and I like your writing. I like the hopeful, striving for something more message. Well written.

[Kacee]

Thank you so much, and I sure hope I can find people who use writing as their way of coping.

[Kacee]

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