Place of Magic

an erotica poem but not an erotica poem

Take a look into my place of magic 

And you won’t be disappointed

It is full of soaking wet regret and 

Dripping with indignity 

It is sticky with satire 

And saturated in sarcasm 

Deliciously decorated just for you.

Glide your hands over my modesty down and into my guilt 

Make my back arch into nightmares and bridges with no other side to them

“Let me do something in return”

I say and,

You ask me if I can swallow, honey I’ve been practicing swallowing all my life 

I swallow my pride, my guilt, my shame 

I swallow my voice sometimes to keep me sane 

I swallow my “no’s” I never complain honey 

Believe me I’m an expert at swallowing

And I know this is what you like so

Come and enter this sacred cavern 

Embellish my walls with milky white lies 

I want to be filled like you so full of yourself 

Fill me with yourself and for the twelfth time you come

 into my place of magic

I promise 

You won't be disappointed.

Author's Note

i've never made an erotic poem before

Reviews

[B]

I like the sarcasm here
Sorry I love it ...... Sex and men
How they view a women .... Like he is a god
And somehow a woman looks at things in light of life
Is this another disappointment covered up in a beautiful body and gorgeous eyes ..... Is he yet another lie .....

You got edge !!1

[Cat]

Thanks Darlin! I'm glad ya think so :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You did very well. You used real life and thoughts to create erotic places and possibilities. I liked the gentle erotic. Made the reader feel the words and want to know more. Dear Cat. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Cat]

Thanks coyote! I'm glad you see it as astounding! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well and you are welcome.

[MarviQueen]

The satire is strong with this one! What a bloody excellent poem - I'm completely taken with your style, imagery and dangerous word-play!

[Cat]

haha thanks so much! I'm glad you think that of my poetry :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I never thought erotica could cover sarcasm so beautifully well! This was really a cool err sorry a hot piece 😛
I enjoyed it very much! Great work here 😊👍

[Cat]

haha thanks so much! I'm glad to have such positive feedback :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! It was a pleasure reading this 😊