I'm okay.

I'm okay with the pain you left for me

I'm okay with the thought of loosing everything

I sit here tonight

With my broken dreams

The ones you took away from me

I don't feel free

I'm okay tonight,

However I've smoked enough for three

I'm okay tonight

However the liquor is getting to me

You took me for granted

And I told you I'm sorry

Even though it wasn't me

It was never me

I'll never be free

This hold you have on me

This chain around my heart has rusted shut

The more I tug the more I cut

I'm okay tonight,

However I've smoked enough for three

I'm okay tonight

However the liquor is getting to me

I'm okay with the lies you said to me

I'm okay with my never ending nightmare

I sit here tonight

with my head on my knees

The things you took away from me

I don't feel free

Reviews

[Justin]

wow this just blew me away im speechless right now

[Kaylee]

Why thank you!

[Justin]

you are welcome i enjoyed this one a lot keep em comin

[Kaylee]

I am! Don't you worry

[Justin]

:) :) awesome

[Zack Valenta]

I love this, the classic angst and solidarity of the pain is immense. The sternness of the writing really accentuates the pain and frustration of not feeling free. "I'm okay" really seems so sternly a hiding-from the aid of others, but also seems to be a crying out for aid - but therein lies the uncertainty of it all. The bipolarity and agitation, the frustration of not knowing what is happening within your own head, really digs it into to me as I read, that the chaos that inspired this is very real. Great work!

[Kaylee]

thank you so much! This feeling is very real to me, and really personal. I am so glad that you love it!