Chase

constant struggle

Feeling empty and feeling hallow

my darkened words just wont spit out

I see the light but I can't feel it

is it because I'm barley breathing now

I've begged god and I've begged the devil

send me to the good and not to the evil

rid me of my thoughts and rid me of my mind

the light just isn't the same anymore, not in my eyes

hours and hours go by

still no thought in my mind

except for how to leave this all behind and where to hide

my heart and mind are black 

I welcome the light though it doesn't embrace me 

constant chase with the darkness behind me

I cant keep up and I cant back down

What am I to do just lay here and drown?

Reviews

[Lucid Dreamer]

I've begged god and I've begged the devil
send me to the good and not to the evil
rid me of my thoughts and rid me of my mind
the light just isn't the same anymore, not in my eyes

I loved this part and I esp. enjoyed this part!

[ashley]

This is such a wonder piece. I really could feel the emotion in it.

[Kaylee]

thank you so much! I appreciate it

[Ma'at]

I've begged god and I've begged the devil
send me to the good and not to the evil
rid me of my thoughts and rid me of my mind
the light just isn't the same anymore, not in my eyes

this stanza is my absolute favorite, you're a great writer
-GS

[Kaylee]

Thank you GS :)