What a Shame

What a Shame

A Poem by Sectando

© 2014 Sectando


Author's Note

Sectando
Yes, that is me in the photo. For those who can not read the photo here is the text:

What a shame.
I have no eyes, no sight to gain.
This darkness seems a bit unfair
to show me things that are not there.

For the one I long to see the most
A love now gone is but a ghost.

I have no eyes, no sight to gain
no beating heart...oh, what a shame.

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It is a great piece. I especially like the last two lines, and I especially liked being able to read it ...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Unfortunately, it is either the resolution on my screen or my old prescription, I cannot read this piece at all.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sectando

10 Years Ago

I put the text in the author's note for you :)
Great work! I agree very honest piece- It has pure raw emotion :) "I have no eyes" Great way to start

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sectando

10 Years Ago

Thank You! :)
This is a very, very honest piece. Sometimes I feel like this...and it is a very dark place to be. You capture your emotions well, and your emotions are often mixed into one: anger, depression, loneliness, etc. I've been in that place too many times....

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sectando

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the detailed review. It is a dark place to be...I find myself there too often myself. .. read more
Great job with this poem! I loved the mood and word choice :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sectando

10 Years Ago

Thank You! :)
Ellizabella Dunnmore

10 Years Ago

No problem! :)
"What a Shame" ... How Riveting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sectando

10 Years Ago

Thank You, Eliza.

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