The memory

The memory

A Poem by Airman Alltop
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Unfinished

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What can I do to get that feeling back
The feeling I had when I saw your face
Hearing your sweet voice after all that way
After being away for so long

I don't remember ever feeling that before
The look inside your eyes warmed my soul
I just stood there in my uniform 
My boots dripping on the floor

I wanted to remember that moment forever
Taking you into my arms your head on my shoulder
Holding on to you so tight never wanting to let go
I wanted to remember that moment, Forever

I never wanted to leave you again
Knowing next time might be the last time
Here I am again thousands of miles away
What can I do to get that feeling back

© 2010 Airman Alltop


Author's Note

Airman Alltop
Fourth draft, and I so far my favorite

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Wow. Very Romantic and very spiritual. Thank you for defending our country: whoever she is a lucky lady.
Beautiful poem.
I know that "never wanting to let go" feeling when faced with a long time away from the one you love.
Welcome back to Writers Cafe.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Really nice.I like

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow. Very Romantic and very spiritual. Thank you for defending our country: whoever she is a lucky lady.
Beautiful poem.
I know that "never wanting to let go" feeling when faced with a long time away from the one you love.
Welcome back to Writers Cafe.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Airman Alltop
Airman Alltop

Minot, ND



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My second account. It has been awhile since I've wrote anything. Now that I have chosen not to play video games anymore and focus on my health, and my work. I have a lot of free time. With it is time .. more..

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