Not So Simple Extraction

you gorge yourself 

in my heat 

and yet 

even when satiated 

satisfaction 

falls limp 

like the aftermath 

of your deep thrusts 

you don’t like to see me shine

don’t know how to harness my divine 

your jealousy knocks the breath from 

my lungs as I land against the wall

and yet 

you flatter me 

your pull is stronger than my push 

we languish in tiny moments 

lasting long enough to keep me 

by your side 

short enough to 

remind me of the door

and yet 

the leather chokes 

I fade to black 

waking to find you

panting, relived, finished

confusion prevails 

as you rise my own heat 

you gorge yourself 

leaving me in my own 

tiny moment of ecstasy 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

This is poetry my friend.
"we languish in tiny moments
lasting long enough to keep me
by your side
short enough to
remind me of the door"
The above lines. We do. Loan and steal the flesh and the kiss. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[barleygirl]

This is so harshly real, it makes me shudder to read it. I want to hate it, but I'm actually hating memories of this kind of situation, as lived by me or any woman I knew well enuf to be privy to it. You've nailed it, the way so many compromise their well-being to feed their libido, laid down in words like torn pieces of kleenex after wiping tears or cum. Sometimes I don't want to go there, but the way you go there, it's harsh, but also artistic, so not a trace of venom (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Earl Smith]

Sounds like a fight between Love and Lust. Lusting for the love of someone who only gives you enough time to satisfy his own needs. I would really enjoy a part 2 of this.

The lines below have so much detail and at the same time, give me so many questions. Great piece. Kept me engaged and wanting more. That is all I can ask for. Great Job.

"lasting long enough to keep me
by your side
short enough to
remind me of the door"

[andrew mitchell]

I feel an undercurrent of imbalance as he gets his rocks off and she waits for hers. Nice write Liz

[Davidgeo]

Passion is something our bodies are made to desire but disdain after realization. It's a biological safety of sorts to make sure we're not just f*****g all the time... nothing would get done otherwise. That's what makes true love so lovely and unique, it transcends that kind of thing. It means more than what can be readily explained through objective terms or biological means. We are one of the few creatures alive who will do irrational things for love beyond sexual gratification.

I also feel like this during a good wank (but not after). Pornography is awesome... I love it.

[wordman]

when you melt into each other is the fantasy

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and leaving the speaker to wonder..are her short moments of ecstasy worth losing herself in him...feeling consumed by his love and passion? even though those moments are to die for.

j.

[KWP]

hey Jacob - so nice to see you :) you know I always appreciate your thoughts - I hope your well - Happy Fetisve Season XXX

[Einstein Noodle]

steam is escaping me collar dahlink! ;) lots of sexual, creative tension with scant release for payment .. waterfalls are one sided with only mist rising in opposing force ... kinky knocked me out ride cowgirl .. though gorged...that selfishness will consume him/her ... you pulled me in and woke me up this morning Elizabeth ... its 4 AM and raining here in the Ozarks .. great write ... your voice is very recognizable and refined says i!
E.

[KWP]

hahaha good morning to you too sunshine ... it's 9pm here Friday night ... have to work in the wee hours tomorrow. Glad you liked. I am enjoying this push and pull with words. I wanted to write something but didn't know what. I feel like at least I have done SOME writing now for the week.

oh yeah, raining here too - been rather hard rain - everything will soon be bursting in more green.

Love ya X

[Einstein Noodle]

ohhh what a treat...you are here too! the play with push and pull tweeks the intellect as well as the ...well....other parts ;) i imagine Australia is stunning in green when it explodes ... we had our winter's snow a few days ago .. just barely covered the ground .. 50-60s this week and yesterday when cutting up a tree I felled, I notice one newly bloomed yellow dandelion ... its the craziest thing around here ... its like one day of winter and things already start sprouting .. next month our flowering pears will bloom along with daffodils and crocus ..so different from six months of winters in SD. hugs and smiles for you my friend ..

[Einstein Noodle]

ps. I just checked out the pic with your poem...that's just plain nasty ma'am! ruined my whole steamy hot from reading >;{

[KWP]

Hahahahahahaha - you know that’s actually Mali’s mouth. He has a sore tooth - hahahahaha - is that wrong ?!?!?! - love ya oh so X

[Einstein Noodle]

a sore tooth is a sore tooth! poor boy! hope he gets a fix on it asap.... big hugs on ya right now Aussie