Imprint

an exercise in love everlasting 

A rare gift to behold 

time here spent in wondrous awe

as I endeavour to imprint me, 

on you, my love, Eternity

A tiny passing cloud is all I am

whisk me into the winds of your everywhen

what I offer is but a moment 

-just a moment 

and I offer it humbly to you

an unclasp-able grasp 

allow me to roll in your gentle waves 

as I promise to

brush lightly across your surface 

leave you with the same tenderness 

you give so freely 

yet we, the conscious,

forget to enjoy

watch me dance in the sun to

the first spring flowers 

this dance into abandon, for you -

please feel the wisp of serenity 

the calm in the storm 

as this zephyr of light 

pushes through the aftermath of 

debris blocking the unseeable 

gates to unfettered bliss

on the scales of duality 

I shall reconnect the ropes 

drawing opposing sides together to

reveal the ethereal oneness you

flood through the arid plains 

of life lacking love 

I do not come baring much at all

only the hope of

imprinting my everlasting love 

on you, my dearest, Eternity 

right here … right now 

I gift myself 

to you

Reviews

[Carson Kramer]

Wow. Just lovely. Such romance and beauty.
"watch me dance in the sun to

the first spring flowers

this dance into abandon, for you -"
This. Right there.

[andrew mitchell]

Nicely written, the title imprint permeates through this write with the reader leaving an imprint. Nice one on love and spirituality comes to mind.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful, generous and kind words shared. You allowed the reader to feel and understand the words and thoughts. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

great expression of love here..."unclaspable being able to clasp"
to hold what at first may not want to be held, but then gladly submits.
love the idea of "wanting to imprint me on you"---

[wordman]

sounds like love to me,,,,,,

[Ardra]

Love this dear one...mmmm I will come again and read latter ....
Too many words ....to say which one is my Fav.all of them :))

[Einstein Noodle]

sung like a true and dedicated seeker ...calling it Eternity and professing unrestrained love to it .. as to a person .. is both challenging to think on and wondrous to imagine .. a real mystery says i!
all along as i read i am stirred and electrified because of the very human love element woven in .. oh to watch one such as you create .. dancing just for me ;) i think you poem is a peek into a sacred place for your speaker ... i feel the hush of the privilege granted ... some light/heavy thoughts and feelings ..bright images with the lightness of air ..this is the poem i will try to keep with me today KW!
E.

[KWP]

ah you read it so perfectly ... if only we could reconnect with the eternal love that can be tapped into and enjoyed by all :D

Thank you E - your thoughts inspire, in fact you inspired me in the wee hours of the morning when I read your message - thank you for that - I have been looking forward to getting back and writing all day - this one was written after a heavy session of boxing - perfect duality me think ;)

Love ya X

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahah why am i not surprised that you are a boxer ..good on ya girl!!! such an expressive sport .. reach deep and hit hard :))))))))))))))))