no beginning and definitely no end

infinity, you are boundless 

and here, I tie myself in knots

you are drenched in possibility 

when we take away the rules 

anything can be

and yet we limit the limitless 

innocence knows infinity 

like an old and fading friend

it’s age

and rules 

and naysayers 

who drive infinity away 

a glimpse of all you hold 

infinity, 

it comes and goes 

like a shooting star 

across my reality 

please can you land 

in my backyard 

so I can immerse myself anew 

Reviews

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Ah. At times I believed infinity to be just two annoying circles that happened to fall in love. But boy can those loops keep your head spinning. And as I thought to have been speeding on it's curve, I fell off and found the edge of its end... Who would of thought infinity had too it's own finish line.

[KWP]

really - you found the edge of it’s end - you really out to tell me all bout that in some kind of lullaby in words - whatever does it look like ?

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Oh if I do, my words would fall short on the beauty of its ending... Where feathers absorb the waters and stars fill your lungs. Just imagine a world where time we're just a tool that winds with your heart. Such a benevolent place. Perhaps I will return to record it's beauty.

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and strong words shared dear friend. I agree.
"please can you land
in my backyard
so I can immerse myself anew "
My wish too. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[KWP]

thank you my friend for stopping by

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[cycy]

this is so true, possibilities are indeed endless but as human beings we always feel a need to limit ourselves, draw boundaries, set rules, but in actual fact, we need not do that. you can touch the sky and kiss the sun if you choose to lox. very insightful piece.

[alanwgraham]

You have made a great job here, KWP of describing the mystery of the indescribable. We find it too easy and comforting to concern ourselves with the mundane day by day and fail to look up in wonder. It can change our perspective on our situation. I'm not too sure if you have some message behind this poem but I'm just going to check my backyard now!
Regards,
Alan

[KWP]

I like your attitude and hope there was a treasure out there waiting ... :D oh and hello and thanks X

[Neville]

But could we not just wonder for ever and ever................

[KWP]

earn;t we doing that already?

[Neville]

We most probably are.........

[M. Lumiére]

I don't want to be -that- guy, but if you want an honest opinion, this is very... mediocre. It lacks rhyme, most definitely, the writing is quite basic and the theme is nothing unique. It's just, yeah, mediocre is the only word that really comes to mind. But I suppose it is relatable for the, how we say, normies, so good job on that.

[KWP]

good honest thoughts for a poem written in the time it takes to wipe ones a*s :D thank you Beto X

[Nipplegrinder]

Beautifully written. I love the theme.

[andrew mitchell]

its like that just as your title says!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Yes - we have physiological limits whilst occupying our bodily shells - but the inner spirit - well that's another matter! Infinite imagination - love your theme and the write - :-)

[Ghost]

I feel like negative people try to influence our opinions and lives and make us miserable... Thank you for sharing a little infinity and life with me..