Could It Be Yin and Yang?

Could It Be Yin and Yang?

an invitation please 

to place one foot 

followed by the the other 

inside the flesh your own

allow me to unravel my legs

inside of yours 

we can bend at your hips

to stand stoic and tall

if I may take my feminine torso 

to take a stand within your masculine

I shall enamor myself in your virtues

please take your time and bathe in mine

like a glove I shall slide into your arms then hands

and with our conjoined fingers, wave in 

anticipation of what’s to come

finally my last request 

to pop my head up through your neck 

like a water balloon squeezing, then aligning 

with you

we shall view the world without division

and dance together in our own song

we can even take requests 

Reviews

[the one inside]

Oh, wrap the flowered ensemble on a cupid wing, perhaps there sleep the clouds that show up a-day, yes, just perhaps.

[Ardra]

your words painted the coming together of two souls and body in such wonderful way !
loved it :)

[Tom]

Brimming aplenty with desire and physical attraction, the resulting chemistry is unyielding and so pleasantly all consuming!

Lustful and lavish poetry my friend!

[andrew mitchell]

clever, witty and maybe naughty kwp

[emmajoy]

' .. like a glove I shall slide into your arms then hands ~ and with our conjoined fingers, wave in ~ anticipation of what’s to come... '

You wonderfully, intelligently naughty you! This poem is so clever, Found myself trying to curve and lean to your words, to follow your needy movements, your destinations. As to that last line.. magical. You and language are great friends, E., your mind is a double rainbow, really is.
Question: did you challenge self having thought of the title or, did it take its chance by falling into your mind uninvited?

[KWP]

the universe did proffer up this title with a pop and a drop and then bam it was there - ie: no effort ...

hello you and thanks for taking the time to read, I know you, like me, sink into the layers which makes your comments even more appreciated :D

This poem was a part of my month long poetry fest - some poor unsuspecting soul got this somewhere on the planet :D LOVE TO YOU CHICK X

[Simran Kewlani]

Love you, girl! I look forward to reading more. X

[Simran Kewlani]

I like the :Yin and Yang' comparison with the topic you have taken. It is original, actually inspires me to incorporate Yin and Yang in my poem at least once, if not more.

[KWP]

thanks for reading lovely one ... pick a topic, sit your butt down, see what transpires :D XXX

[Davidgeo]

"please take your time and bathe in mine"

For me, that line is all you really need to read.

I'd elaborate but I've been drinking... (therefore I'm retarded at the moment)

[KWP]

elaborate away ....

[Davidgeo]

Surprisingly, I'm actually kinda self conscious when I drink.

[pia]

super clever !!! loved this poem and its rhythmic vibes. loved the depth and emotions brought out in this one

[KWP]

thank you pia :D

[Einstein Noodle]

oh do i love this one Elizabeth ..it is so sexy and deeply philosophical and the possibility of raised sublime ecstasy .. i love how your poem touches on virtue at the core of such a union ..and dance as its expression .. i went there with you so well done indeed .. into me library with this one ..i think you have hit on the cure for depression, loneliness and sorrow ... such a fine poem
E.

[KWP]

ha - I am chuffed you love it .. yes total immersion in another, and now I am reminded of a scene from one of Clive Barkers books where two of his characters make love and they kind of step inside each other, he wrote it so powerfully - I loved it, something that has stayed with me for more than twenty years X Love Ya E X

[Einstein Noodle]

love you too my friend ((((((((((((U)))))))))))))))