Orgasmic Epicentre

Day 6 - NaPoWriMo - April is poetry month - I write a poem each day for the month

surrender takes hold 

at the epicentre of an orgasm

body takes over 

mind not required 

b   l   i   s   s   

complete surrender 

at the epicentre 

equals 

b   l   i   s   s

excuse me while 

I seek the epicentre of 

love 

Reviews

[Deuces]

How beautiful it would be to fully surrender. Your writing took me to a different place, even if only temporary. Awesome, as always.

[Giulia King]

This was just lovely to read! I love the way you connect the words to one another.

[wordman]

making love during a gentle rain on the bed swing in your gazebo with the fire pit burning ,hot tub waiting
you go into a total bliss ,no track ot time or space

[KWP]

oh yes you got it ... time no longer is required to exist X

[apennylate]

Surrendering during bad weather is very dreary, much like the epicenter of earrings attached to the center of the ceiling, hah, love your work and wordplay, KWP... Everytime... Blissfully penned...

[KWP]

oh I dunno - I think surrendering in bad weather could be rather perfect - I mean - what else to do but surrender and get to know yourself a little better - even in the darkest hour :D ... now about those earring ... d****t I had been looking for those ... who the heck hung them from the ceiling ?

[apennylate]

Haha, some devilish hooligan, that is who... Hoot hoot, he said, then poofed into the night...

[KWP]

better not have poofed with my earrings!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wish i could get my mind away from other things also...and just react to life...too much experience now for that to happen.
relate to this in different ways...
j.

[KWP]

I have been feeling the pull of meditation - actually sat in zazen yesterday - never to much experience to learn how to clear the mind - nice to see you Jacob X