August Postcard Poetry Festival 2016

August Postcard Poetry Festival 2016

A Poem by KWP
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I participated in this wonderful festival again this year. A free flowing poem a day for the month of August - on a postcard and sent around the planet. This year my them was from my recent trip.

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Borneo Sunset


Clouds dancing to a unique rhythmic waltz 

refusing to be stirred from reverie.

Acting out their very own fairytale,

as hues of pastels whisper the story to the sky.

Fighting to finish the last act,

before the sunset depletes. 


The dark night sky wins yet again.





Virgin Borneo Rainforest


Living, breathing, all as one ….. 

walking into the heart,

of the rainforest.


Air wet, stifling heat,

movement adopts a new heaviness. 


Moss, pear, pickle, basil, pine, sage …

all the greens thrive alive underneath 

the heavy canopies, a freshness of 

what it means to survive 

one hundred million years, nurturing,

feeding …

the circle of life.




Swallow Spit


‘Madam, I promise you, it very good for you.’

He’s trying to sell me the saliva of a swallow.


‘Madam, it good for your lung, it good for your blood circulation.’

These birds (swallows) make their nests out of their own saliva. 


‘You see this nest, we already clean it for you, then we make the drink.’ 

I cannot imagine drinking bird spit, swilling it in my mouth, 

forcing myself to swallow. (No pun intended.)


‘Oh no madam, the flavour is exquisite, why you crinkle your nose?’ 

They say this saliva is a rarity, good for older people, 

good for complexion, also very expensive -not a bad taste either.


‘This good market price madam, Borneo price, please try.’






Ho Chi Minh War Museum 


Cool relief inside the museum,

from the heat of a Saigon day

where perspiration slides down 

arms, back, legs and intermingles 

at the bottom of my hairline, reminding me

- I am alive.

A moments reprieve before 

being launched face first into 

atrocities almost forgotten. 


Warned before entering this 

Vietnam War exhibition.

‘They show it how it happened,’ they said,

‘Not one sided, just the truth.’ 


The  photographs lining wall after wall 

advocating the story of this war -

I will not describe, 

no, I will not paint a picture of soldiers tortured,

nor chronicle victims of land mines, 

I shall not attempt to illustrate horrendous 

affects of agent orange,

or convey how a town 

appears after it has been bombed.

I cannot translate for you

a mother’s face when she realises 

she has lost her entire family in one momentous blast.

Neither will I express the 

hurt, pain and anguish I saw in the eyes

of those -

  • who had all meaning of life selfishly taken.


I will however make mention of the tendrils of sadness

encasing my soul, the loaded burden of the dead, disfigured, 

and affected crushing my heart, scene after scene displayed 

squeezing my innards, constricting my breath.

Each photograph my mind skips its own override,

as the gross point gravity lands

upon my upturned hands in askance of why?




A Vietnamese Feast 


Rice wine to start the feast,

dutch courage it will bring,

you better make mine a double,

to wash down everything.


Goat breast, white meat

grilled on a tiny flame.

Dissected frog - dip in sauce,

only if you’re game.

Frog tastes like chicken, 

the bouncer didn’t get away.

Skin tastes very fishy - 

confusing in every way. 

‘Wash it down with beer my friend,

for now they bring Balut,

the embryo of a duck it is,

cooked in it’s eggshell - oh that’s just beaut!’ (oh no!)

‘Marinated in tamarind, 

forget the bird is there,

munch down on the beak my friend,

a delicacy we like to share.’


Dessert is served, balance regains

- rambutan, lychee, mango,

breathe a sigh of relief I do,

I survived the Vietnamese Streetfood tango.





Street Frogs With Desire



Two best mates named Chuck and Bill,

always thinking of food.

Until one day Chuck did declare, 

‘Diet time -I no longer look good in the nude!’


So Chuck set out and made a plan,

daily running,  waters edge, by the hollow 

Chuck liked to lead, thought he was boss

Bill his best friend did dutifully follow. 


That morning Chuck browsed the internet,

he was searching for new sneakers.

‘Nike is for me,’ he declared,

while Bill inspected Nike’s features. 


Not impressed, Bill spoke his mind,

‘Sneakers make you slow.

You’ve been gifted with the bounce my friend,

Purple Nike’s won’t allow go-go-go!’


‘Stop fussin’ Bill,’ Chuck did demand,

his mind made-up and set and clear.

Trendy purple Nike’s he did purchase,

dreamt of how he’ll look in his new gear. 


Bill boinged away shaking his head, 

Chuck had left him feeling in a poop,

the last frog who had bought a pair of Nike’s 

disappeared to rumours being boiled in a humans soup.


Bill was practising his callisthenics,

when Chuck proudly wobbled by,

Purple Nike’s on Chuck’s back feet, 

Bill thought they bought out the lime-green of his eyes. 


‘Now look at you,’ Bill did yell, 

‘You can hardly muster a bounce,

you’ve gone from fast to slow, in your own silly show,

it’s your stupidity you flounce.’ 


Chuck made to comment, but all too late,

a giant net swooped, depositing him in a bag.

‘Humans!’ Bill cried, but all to late,

for Chuck was now a human-dinner-snag. 


Chuck did fight with all his might,

jump out of the bag he could not do.

His purple Nike’s weighing him down,

He screamed, ‘Why did I buy these shoes?’


The bag was tied, hung on the side,

of the fat boys sparkly tangerine bicycle. 

Salivating at the lips was he

dreaming of frogs fry and a berry icicle.


The boy gave Chuck, to his mum

said, ‘please mum cook him for my dinner.’ 

Throwing Chuck’s Nike’s in the bin, 

he laughed knowing who, in this story, is the winner. 


‘Mum,’ he said, ‘It’s funny how,

frog tastes like chicken mixed with dirty socks

this one was wearing purple Nikes,

I may not have caught him in Ree-boks!’




Pygmy 


I see you there, 

idling 

along the river bank. 


For what brings you here alone?

Food, water, stillness?

I’m told you only travel within a pack. 


I mean no offence 

when I admire your itty-bitty size.

Fully grown your pint-sized everything 

makes me scrunch my face 

at your delightfully adorable all.


Toot? can you give me a toot?

Surely a trumpet from that weeny trunk 

is too much to ask. 

No? ah - instead I shall enjoy this moment,

just you and I,

companionless companions,

eyeing each other in wonder. 



Apple Stew Kind of Moment 


It seems there are equal measure of good and bad,

perhaps it is meant to be this way, 

you know, to keep the balance. 

The universe is no stranger to conflict, 

in fact the very core of this 

Granny Smith style existence has been built on 

a fracas of clashes and collision. 


Moments of beauty and truth exist 

in the stillness of the everywhen. 

Goodness is an inherent treasure

to be found blossoming face up,

laughing raucously as the world 

collides in a cold stew of conflict, 

knowing goodness himself will finally reign

when we accept in totally the finality of 

the now (no strings attached - just the now). 





Head Hunting Today


I met a young man in Borneo, 

he called himself Mac Allister. 

‘Mac or Allister, you decide which one you like,’

was his suggestion. 


Mac is a descendant of the Borneo head hunting tribe

and the eldest of his two brothers and one sister. 

Being the eldest comes with great honour, 

his father’s duty - to show him the ways of the tribe. 


When Mac was still a tiny fourteen year old boy, 

his father plied him with rice wine one evening, 

so much rice wine, the house walls wobbled like

the noodles in his mothers fish soup. 

So much rice wine the shape of his fathers head 

started resembling a market fresh jack fruit.

So much rice wine …… 


Having lost control of his limbs and rendering himself 

in a state of ‘not in control’, he gave up the fight and lay 

staringly lifeless on the straw matted floor. 


Bordering on unconscious he watched on as his father

lay his heavy ‘like a coconut dirt filled head’ in his lap.

Quite unexpected, shocked and deliriously upset was Mac

when he realised, all too late, before he blacked out complete, 

his father was administering the age-old headhunters tradition 

of breaking each of his incisors right out of their sockets. 

He was about to loose his front teeth!!


‘The Headhunter’s do this for a stronger blast on the sumpitan.’ 

Sumpitan you ask?

‘The blow pipe for hunting.’ 


Mac, smiled his perfectly all too perfect  smile as he remembered his father’s act. 

‘I was upset for many days,’ he assured. 

‘But now I have false teeth, it does not matter, 

and yes, I have honoured the head hunting tradition.’ 






Rainforest Rain 


The wet season of Borneo 

promises rain, each and every afternoon. 

Pin pointing the exact time can be

queried only by the clouds,

everyone else will be given 

about thirty seconds warning. 


Buffeting ears with the sound of 

millions of droplets of water 

converging all at once,

piercing their way 

onto, through, 

the dense canopy up yonder. 

Whoosh, it is upon you, 

a wall of water, rapidly escalating to a deluge, 

rain drops pricking at your skin as if you 

are a voodoo doll done bad. 


Hair, clothes plastered to head and body.

A refreshing hiatus from the 

days trollop through the humid walls 

weighing you down so heavily you feel 

you have the footprint of an elephant mixed 

together with the energy of a sloth.


Turning your face up the the flood from above, 

wash away the days deeds, 

you notice the sun smile through, 

and the rain continues on,

without you.





Trilobite 


Not much has carried it’s own weight 

through the ages without feeling the need to evolve. 


One evening, 

in Danum Valley, Sabah, Borneo,

I was out with my friend Mac. 

Mac was born and raised in the rainforest. 


‘I don’t like cities,’ he affirms, 

‘why do I need to when I have this?’ 


And, with a long inhale of 

one hundred and ten million year old, 

virgin rain forest surrounds, 

I was in complete agreeance. 


It was not long off after the 

torrential rains had stopped, 

we trekked, torch in hand, to visit

the nocturnal ones. 


Owls, flying squirrels, tiny bats, 

mouse deer, frogs, spiders, all presented 

themselves for my special delight. 


There was one young bug-lass, who caught my attention, 

she goes by the name of Trilobite. 

She’s sturdy, 

long, flat, with large scales protecting her body. 

She and the rest of her kind have been 

foraging through this virgin rainforest floor 

for millions of years. 


I noted, 

she is not ‘bugging’ anyone, 

she is ‘at one’, because she is one, 

with the everywhen of her surrounds

and eternity. 





Mining the Land 


Taking only a millisecond, 

a farmer in the Mekong, 

will change the course of the lives 

of both him and his family forever.


It’s not like in the movies, 

I was told. No, in the movies, 

you first of all hear a ‘click’, 

and once you hear the ‘click’

the thoughts of a trillion stars flash 

before your eyes - then BOOM!

  • You are either dead, 

or, you have had limbs blown right away from their bones.

Land-mines.

Forty years after the hate recedes,

after enemies recoil to lick their wounds, 

after the rebuilding of a nation -

life goes on.

The farmers however,

play lotto with life, 

treading hopefully to avoid the remaining 

500,000 to 2,000,000
land-mines waiting to be discovered.

I guess, 

they can be thankful of one tiny luxury
(if one can call it that), 

unlike the movies, it’s instantaneous, 

there is no click!




Borneo Moon


You wrote…

You asked… 

when was the last time you really saw the moon? 


I smiled. 


La Luna in all of her grandeur,

her magnanimous beauty, 

her waxing lyrical,

without even having to utter a word, 

her waning so seductively,

winking at me as each night passes, 

for she knows, 

I have always been in awe 

of her, 

slipping her svelt form, 

momentarily away, 

until she is reborn, 

for me, 

- yes only for me.

We do the nightly waltz, her and I, 

she’s a tease, tempting me,

always offering more than I have ever been ready for,

and I wouldn’t have her,

any other way.





Danum Valley Rainforest in Borneo


G is for Green

green of the rainforest, 

we absorb the mildew, 

squelch upon the moss, 

inhale the minty overtures and

seek emerald leaves.


The still breeze of constant renewal, 

murmurs through millions old vines.

Ancient mosaic of 

an embroiled symmetry 

cascading canopies, 

flourishing for the soul purpose 

of existence … 

ah,

we humans have much to unlearn.






Mama & Baby Borneo


‘Hey Mama,’ 

‘Yes baby?’

‘What are those humans doing down there?’ 

‘They are looking at us baby?’

‘Why Mama?’

‘Well baby, many years ago, 

there were many thousands of Orangutans.’ 

‘Thousands Mama?’ 

‘Yes Baby, thousands.’ 

‘What happened Mama?’

‘Humans, happened baby, 

they took away our home, the rainforest, 

the tribes of Borneo used to kill us for food, 

sometimes Orangutans are even stolen 

so people can have us as pets.

Our Orangutan population has dwindled

so much so it has

made the few of us who are left 

prized and protected specimens.’ 


Baby frowns, trying to understand. 


‘Is that why they are looking at us mama?’ 

‘Why do you think baby?’ 

‘Maybe to prove to themselves, 

and their children, 

that, we were once real.’


‘Maybe baby, 

silly humans are always 

trying to prove this or that, one day they

might learn to take the hand of 

the everywhen, instead of always fighting 

against it.’ 

‘What does that mean Mama?’

‘You already know in your heart 

what that means baby, one day 

you will understand in your consciousness, 

let’s hope it’s no too late.’ 




In Every Direction



The vines, 

they whine

and hinge

up the spine. 


The vines, 

the whirl,

they twirl

like a girl. 


They wrap,

suck sap,

they flip

and flap.


The rainforest vines

are everywhere,

on the ground

on that three there.


Vibrant green

so lush,

they make 

me gush.


The vines 

sublime

last through

what seems

eternal time.




Red Leaf Monkey

you face leads me to believe 

you are forlorn. 


And yet, 

you dance

you prance 

jump at a glance.

Fly through the air 

relinquishing all care,

from one tree to the next

I watch perplexed

as you bound through life 

in the rainforest air

looking sadly - yet you are free up there.


Or perhaps you look,

sad for me. 

Because I 

have not the freedom 

like you, to just be.

Tarantula


It was unfortunate really, 

July in Borneo means nest time. 

Staying put in their nests,

deep in the ground, 

protecting their many  

hundreds of eggs. 


Three weeks later 

promises 

mummy spider,

and all of her hundreds of tiny offspring, 

(Tarantula)

would be running 

hither tither, 

all over the base of 

the ancient tree, 

right above where 

she built her nest.


Can you even imagine that sight to behold?




Golden Ray


‘A little ray of sunlight… ‘

yes, go on, sing it … 

‘on a Borneo Rainforest day.’


Wondrous is a word 

I’d like to capture for the tiny moment

when the morning sun 

reaches the perfect angle 

to weave it’s way

through the rainforest canopy.

The mist thick, hanging low

promising I can climb aboard that 

Ray Of Sunlight, 

frolic my way to the treetops,

meet up with the Orangutans, the Proboscis,

maybe even the Red Leaf Monkey. 


Just to be, in the tree, 

needing nothing,

but me ….



Hot


Ah, it’s hot, hot and humid

down in the Danum Valley Rainforest. 

I hear the river, 

water calls to cool. 


One foot, two feet in tepid water, 

the only luxury required. 


But wait… 

hundreds of fish

hot tail their way to each foot

suck, suck, sucker!

Planting mouths on bare skin, 

like thousands of tiny needles

piercing only the uppermost skin.

Sensation almost unbearable,

I hold tight and observe. 


Only in Borneo

can I get my feet cleaned 

by three inch fish.

Only here are my feet 

known to be a delicacy 

to them. Eat on little fish!




Humidity 


Walking through a wall 

of thick set air that is

laden with sunlight, water

and it’s own special kind if heat

is not easy. 


As soon as the sun hits the skyline

with it the air becomes heavy. 


One feels it with each step. 

feel the sweat beads rolling down your back, 

between your breasts, 

travelling between the skin and fabric of pants, 

pants stick to skin, 

argh, it’s even harder to walk. 


Cambodia is no stranger to 

humidity. People of Cambodia 

are up close and personal friends with humidity, 

unlike myself, always seeming to battle 

against the wave of heat, 

instead of relenting, relaxing 

in the cool on a hammock, like the locals.




Centipede of Borneo 


Oh, giant centipede,

you have a bundle of legs, 

enough to keep you 

in supply of tiny toes for the 

rest of you life.


Hmmmm, 

do you have toes?

Do you have feet?

Do you have any requirement 

for socks?


I am not very handy at knitting, 

but if you tell me you get cold 

in the deep winter months 

in the rainforest, 

I will certainly learn this craft 

for you, 

your feet 

and your thousand toes. 


Oh yes, that’s right. 

Borneo sits very close to the equator,

thank you for the reminder,

you will never ever need 

one hundred pairs of tiny socks. 


Phew!





Swimming In Borneo


There’s a rock in 

in the Danum Valley River, 

it has the look of an elephant. 


Big round eye looking as you 

cross the bridge, 

trunk pointing upwards. 

He looks happy, 

this elephant rock. 


I made a point of swimming 

in this river, surrounded in every direction

by deep rainforest, 

Red Leaf Monkeys, 

Orangutan, 

Otters (stay out of their way - angry critters),

Silver Tailed Monkeys, 

swimming snakes,

  • don’t worry if they are in the water, 

they can’t bite, 

Sucker Fish,

Hornbills, 

Proboscis, 

and not to mention the elephants themselves, 

Pygmy Elephants. 


Mali, my son and I would swim upstream, 

catch ourselves in the current, 

(which was quite strong as it had torrentially rained

just moments before), 

and direct ourselves for elephant rock. 

We had to get a fast grip as we passed, 

water gushing, flushing all around us, 

we had to hold on tight, 

then climb. 

We’d sit on elephant rock for a bit, 

take stock of our surrounds, 

ah, our surrounds, a divine moment,

then swim upstream to do it all again. 





Shine On


Worth it? 

Oh yes, I would say it was worth 

every moment. 

Rising early in Danum Valley, Borneo,

that’s 3:30am early.

Driving for one hour through thick rainforest, 

reaching the Danum Valley Field Centre, 

climbing the tower, 

and waiting

for the sun to rise. 


The stars, 

oh the stars in the pre-dawn darkness, 

as I stared into the silent sky, 

gazing upon history already made, 

remembering we all have our own tiny 

significance. 


As the sky lightens, 

we bare witness to a blanket of 

cloud, across the Valley, 

mountain peaks 

pushing through, 

patiently awaiting the sun, 

to say ‘Hello Borneo, 

I am back to settle here for another day, 

and together we can all - Shine On.’






War


Mekong, 

history has taken a fair play with you. 

Yet, here you are today, 

with your own special glow of 

forgiveness. 

A lesson many still grasp to understand. 




Forgiveness


There is a special kind of warmth 

in the hello, the smile and greeting, 

given by the people of Cambodia. 


This warmth you can feel, 

right down to your core, 

if you choose to engage it. 


Now let us remember,

The Killing Fields, 

the Khmer Rouge, 

the Vietnam War, 

the land-mines, 

the dead.


A country where family, 

friends and livelihood, 

were stripped away.


And yet, on this day, 

I am greeted by them, 

with LOVE. 




No Ordinary Massage


Pin pricks 

screaming in their descent

from the sky. 

Thousands upon thousand of them. 

Each lands on bare skin, 

so sharp they whisk 

the breath right out of you in a gasp.


No reprieve, 

no-where to go. 

Escape is not an option. 


And so it is, 

the afternoon rains in Cambodia. 

Unleashing their army 

of raindrops,

to wash away 

the days decay.

After the assault of pin pricks, 

one is fresh and free, 

naked of humid sweat, 

and enlivened to the point 

of celebrating the rain.





Immersion 


Come take a walk, 

deep within, total 

immersion awaits. 


Danum Valley Rainforest, 

where, 

the humidity cocoons, 

heavy set morning mist

languishes awaiting the sun. 

Species stir, 

in their own way, 

homes not yet disturbed 

(by humans). 

Layer upon layer of 

foliage, 

a green rainbow unto itself, 

across the canopy, 

vines, trees, shrubs 

growing side by side, 

on top of each other, 

ever so slowly engaging in 

their own version of 

‘survival of the fittest’. 

Ground covered, 

a mossy hue, 

insects scamper,

hither tither.

never in a hurry. 


Breath a zephyr, 

culminate’s with ancient surrounds,

realising our own immersion.





Romancing The Temple


Angkor Thom,

what secrets do you hold

of the Hindu’s.

then the buddhist monks, 

to the wide eyed tourists. 


Touch your walls, 

your carvings, 

your history. 

It’s all here, 

presented and accounted for.


Now temple walls -

speak to me of ancient truths.


Cambodian Buddhist


I see you there, 

a lone Buddhist Monk, 

robes of bright orange, 

lighting gifts of candles, 

to all of the Buddha’s, 

in Angkor Wat.


We are so different, 

our conditioning moulds us, 

and yet, intrinsically, 

we are both the same. 


Tell me, have you found 

your answers yet?





The Queen


‘Come,’ said the guard,

who was on duty down at 

Angkor Thom. 


‘Come, I show you the Queen.’

Moving through ancient corridors, 

where walls have smashed into rubble, 

scrambling over rocky mounds, 

darkness around each corner. 


‘Come, for no-one ever visits the Queen.’ 


Follow through, cold, dank 

temple of another time, 

turn this corner, that, 

a splash of sunlight 

peeks through the 

ceiling in ruin. 


One more turn. 

There she is, 

The Queen. 

Adorned in candles, 

golden scarves and frills, 

the sculpted Queen 

rests alone, 

awaiting 

me.





Fishy Fish


Oh sucker fish 

of Borneo, 

it takes all of my will

to keep my immersed feet steady and still

in the river passing through Danum Valley

whilst you go to work 

with pin-prick like precision,

cleaning my feet.


Oh man, unbearable!




Rolley Poley 


Giant Centepede, 

oh wait, are you a millipede?

I cannot remember. 


Rolley Poley, 

you are so big, 

I watch you as you pass

in front on me, 

in your home, 

the rainforest. 


Forgive me Rolley Poley,

for I cannot help 

but to disturb you, 

forcing you into 

self preservation mode. 


You are now round and the size of a 

ping pong ball, 

stripes and all. 


You make me smile at 

the sight. 


I place you down, 

out of harms way, 

and carry on 

happier for this day.





And Then There Were None



Baby Lom, Baby Lom,

what does your future hold? 


You are up the tree, 

with your mummy, 

eating leaves 

life still free. 


Palm oil -

a lurking fear, 

the more we use, 

the more they come near.


Wiping out forest, 

and with it your home, 

Baby Lom, 

Orangutan’s soon be gone. 


Foresight in humans, 

something we lack, 

forgive me Lom, 

forgive the loss of your habitat. 


Orangutan’s extinct, 

and that was that. 





Emerald Green, Looks Like a Bean. 


Did you ever see 

a six inch snake, 

emerald green, 

in striking pose, 

ready for action?


Tiny head quivering, 

body curled, 

caught in a circle 

of human admirer’s. 


With a little lack of awareness,

and one giant boot, 

that little snake, 

would be splatter cake!


Phew!




StreetFare of Vietnam


“Winner, winner,

chicken dinner.”

“Er… no chicken.”

‘Whaddya mean it’s not chicken?”

“No chicken.”

“But it has white flesh, consistency of chook.”

“Yes, but not chook.”

“Come on, what is it if it ain’t chicken?”

“You remember today at market, 

you saw animal been skinned, 

still alive, 

jumping around.

You pointed it out to me, 

it no longer had head. 

You thought it was fascinating 

thrashing about alive, no head.”

“I remember - a fat headless, skinless frog.”

(Points to meal.)

“You eating frog.”

“Noooooo.”

“Yeeeesssss.” (Smirk) 

“But….”

“No you stop complaining, 

you said Winner, Winner, 

means you were enjoying the chook of the swamp.
Now, try  skin of frog. If you

no longer like chicken dinner,

skin taste like fish, you can now switch to 

‘Winner, winner, what is my dinner?’

(Chuckles to himself).





To Market


It’s hot, real hot 

at the Kota Kinabalu Market. 

Not much shade, 

yes, I will have a fresh squeezed 

sugarcane juice to 

keep fluids up. 


Now what else.

Dresses and skirts, 

Salwar sets.

Rings, lots of rings.

They sell puppies and 

fish, tropical fish, 

kittens and duck, many ducklings. 

I see fruit and veg, 

there’s breast milk soap.

Yes ‘Breast Milk Soap.’ 

I may have missed a golden opportunity 

not making my own soap when 

breastfeeding. 

There are kettles and kitchenware,

magnets for tourists, 

all with Orangutan, 

and Proboscis and elephant,

Pygmy Elephant that is. 

Ah its hot, 

yes I will have a freshly opened 

coconut to keep me hydrated, 

But wait, what’s that… 

Swallow Spit!

Guaranteed to fix all ailments. 

Ah it’s hot …


Rambutan


You are spiky,

I still wish to rip you open 

peel your skin away

and devour your white flesh. 


Your colours of pink and green 

and all in between proffer a smile, 

yet I desire to tear it off, toss it to the ground,

so I can slurp at your juices. 


You are colourful and spiky yet,

soft in my hand, and I continue to 

dream of the moment when your taste

relinquishes itself on the buds of my tongue, 

where I will swish your meat between my teeth, 

over my tongue until all that is left is your seed. 


Only then, 

Shall spit you out!




Kampuchea


And even though 

your country 

has witnessed atrocities 

such as the Vietnam War, 

the Khmer Rouge and 

The Killing Fields, 

landmines still filling your earth, 

husbands, wives, fathers, mothers, 

children, grandparents either dead, 

or amputees….

and even though you country lives in 

poverty, with child sex trafficking rampant, 

kids on the streets commonplace, 

no wifi at home (heaven forbid!) no wifi, 

each day a struggle, 

little help from government. 

Yes even though it seems as if Camdodia’s scales 

were never set to balance, 

in your hearts I see lightness, 

in your soul I feel peace. 

I commend you, observe you,

I learn from you. 

Thank You.














© 2016 KWP


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Hello KWP,

Wow, this was much longer than I anticipated. I took notes as I read:

Living, breathing, all as one ….. *the ellipsis is unnecessary here

the heavy canopies, a freshness of *heavy is an overused word, consider dense, thick, or dark

‘Madam, I promise you, it very good for you.’ *good is a weak adjective here, consider using excellent, exquisite, magnificent, splendid, or superb instead

These birds (swallows) make their nests out of their own saliva. *drop own, it isn't necessary

I cannot imagine drinking bird spit, swilling it in my mouth, forcing myself to swallow. (No pun intended.) *swilling could be confusing to your readers, consider swirling instead

A [moment's] reprieve before

atrocities {were] almost forgotten.

appears after it has been bombed. *been bombed is written in a passive voice, consider revising

hurt, pain[,] and anguish I saw in the eyes

who had all meaning of life selfishly taken[?]

I will[,] however[,] make mention of the tendrils of sadness

Each photograph my mind skips its [ ] override,

for now[,] they bring Balut,

cooked in [its] eggshell - oh that’s just beaut!’ (oh no!)

Dessert is served, balance regains *is served is written in passive voice, consider revising

Bill[,] his best friend[,] did dutifully follow.

You’ve been gifted with the bounce my friend, *been gifted is written in a passive voice, consider revising

Chuck had left him feeling [like] poop,

disappeared to rumours being boiled in a humans soup. *being boiled is written in a passive voice, consider revising

Bill was [practicing] his [calisthenics],

you’ve gone from fast to slow, in your own silly show, *own isn't necessary here

‘Humans!’ Bill cried, but all [too] late,

I may not have caught him in [Reeboks]!’

I mean no [offense]

Toot? [Can] you give me a toot?

No? [Ah] - instead I shall enjoy this moment,

It seems there [is] equal measure of good and bad,

Granny Smith style existence has been built on *been built is written in a passive voice, consider revising

a fracas of clashes and collision[s].

when we accept in [its entirety,] the finality of

When Mac was still a tiny [fourteen-year-old] boy,

the noodles in his [mother']s fish soup.

So much rice wine the shape of his [father's] head

started resembling a market fresh [jackfruit].

So much rice wine …… *the ellipsis is unnecessary here

in a state of 'not in [control,'] he gave up the fight and lay

staringly lifeless on the [straw-matted] floor.

He was about to [lose] his front teeth!!

Mac, smiled his perfectly all too perfect smile as he remembered his father’s act. *delete the extra space between the words perfect and smile

‘But now I have false [teeth; it] does not matter,

[Pinpointing] the exact time can be

everyone else will be given *be given is written in a passive voice, consider revising


are a voodoo doll done [badly].

Turning your face up the the flood from above, *delete the extra 'the'

wash away the [day's] deeds,

and the rain continues on, *delete 'on', it's unnecessary here

Not much has carried [its] own weight *delete the word 'own', it is unnecessary here

virgin [rainforest] surrounds,

she is ‘at [one,'] because she is one,

I was told. No, in the movies, *was told is in a passive voice, consider revising

you[,] first of all[,] hear a ‘click[,']

and once you hear the ‘click.’

[The] thoughts of a trillion stars flash

I'm going to stop there because it is getting really late and there is so much more to read. If you would like me to continue, just let me know.

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi

Posted 8 Years Ago


I got pretty deep before I realized it was epically long. Not bad, but damn, so long.

Reviews for this will come in chapters....

1st chapter- you use too many words.

Or would you have me pretend to have read the whole thing when I really just read part of it? "Wonderful imagery. Truly a magical trek you took. Thank you for sharing. Anton**"





Posted 8 Years Ago


Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

We've met before. I love your hair...
Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

I do like your writing.... I just wish this particular piece was more digestible. I'll finish it soo.. read more
KWP

8 Years Ago

We have met before ... This is true ... Don't worry yourself about finishing reading this ... It's t.. read more
You had quite the adventure and then took us with you to all the high points! The Rambutan was my favorite part...I could feel the prickly skin, taste the white meat, and feel the strings between my teeth. Wonderful imagery. Truly a magical trek you took. Thank you for sharing. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


KWP

8 Years Ago

Ah thank you for reading Lydi - it was a great trip, the best part, sahring it all with the three bo.. read more
What sheer joy to read the whole write, this describes the places and their amazing beauties stunningly... Most of the titles are catchy and unique in their own way and trying sat something magical... I can understand how much time it has taken to write down, all the various parts of this world... The Asian culture, food, nature and love, has been so well presented in this whole collection of poems... I hope you are well... Good to see you after a long long time...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


KWP

8 Years Ago

ahh thanks you for making it through :) it was an amazing trip .... we humans are more fortunate tha.. read more
damn girl,you wrote a book ! but i loved it all especially the red monkey

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KWP

8 Years Ago

Thanks boyfriend - sending love X
you can't fool me KW! you drank the spit didn't you! :)) what a sport you are to sample all those foods ..the embryos would be my down fall i am afraid ..i watched a TV show in which the loosing contestants had to eat rotten embryo ducks ..immature feathers and all ...ugh :{
what a trip you have had my friend! each day presenting something unique ... in a colorful foreign land ... no wonder you haven't been posting much around here lately ..good to see you are back but i would take the bet you will soon be off again right!?? ;))
E.


Posted 8 Years Ago


KWP

8 Years Ago

Oh my goodness, I would be off again tomorrow if I could, but unfortunately I am going to have to ha.. read more
What an epic write, this must have taken you ages to write KWP. I feel I have been to Borneo, Vietnam and Cambodia now, tasted the fruits, danced in Nikes, met humble people, seen the sunsets and one of my favourite birds the graceful Swallow. They make a lovely whistle sounding so sweet.

Posted 8 Years Ago


KWP

8 Years Ago

And you get the gift of love for reading the lot ... Thanks mate and happy Father's Day to ya X
Must have been some trip. Having had the opportunity to just go would have had my heart racing. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


KWP

8 Years Ago

Oh yes, it was amazing, learnt so much, appreciated the people, had perfect times with my family. read more

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