The Stars .... They Died For You and I

Einstein Noodle and Myself teamed up for this one ... Love your thoughts guys and Gals ...

within the deepest inhalation 

we may catch the heart of all the stars

swept along in camouflaged breezes - 

a rascal no less creating a stir 

wind is nature's cheeky commotion 

steadily gifting free rides to 

tango-loving gypsy stardust

rising shores a trillion drops deep

quenching the thirst of existence 

pellucid water pulsing pink across ancient coral

bursting stars, dust and billow 

emancipated in ripples wave

i see the all within your face

reds, blues, greens and silver 

colors draining back to the depths

and yet 

gusting flames echo in reflection 

invitation of heated caresses from your eyes 

cinder and ash orbit within your sparkle

fire long since burnt out endures

serving only to bless you, bless me

incarnate star 

offering essence eternal ....

found as in youth

poking sticks under rocks 

prodding tongues of Christmas Beetles

down in the land where 

wild mushrooms grow and

musk in blackest earth 

among apples, acorns, rocks and Hickory trees

the intricate interlace of now 

coalesces elements

beloved stardust entrusted 

us our absolute 

miraculous star

born from a vacuous space

we are the miracle 

within the star 

pacing its ebb and flow and

always in unity

collaboration between E. and KWP

Reviews

[daninstockholm]

very well done, my dear, cool images and excellent flow of thought! xx

[KWP]

thank you - This was a collaboration between Einstein Noodle and myself - was such a treat to hang out with him and end up with this X

[andrew mitchell]

What a combo What a team! Excellent imagery and flow. The wow factor!

[ANTO]

As a cosmosphile I loved this. As a poet meh...joking guys...!!
There was not one line of slack in this tight and superior piece. I really thought it a scholarly write in all sincerity. My jaw dropped at line one and stayed dropped until the last line.
Such chemistry and vision.
Loved it E and KwP.

[Einstein Noodle]

so glad you posted this as well luv! still riding the experience ... you were a wonderful collaborator for sure!
E.

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome tag team with Einstein :) I really like the choice of words throughout this write and how well it flowed even with two writers contributing. Good work KWP :)

[Willard Wells]

Well done with lots of color and imagery. I like the feel of it.

[Valentine]

Free rides to tango loving gypsy...love that line. Valentine