And Round and Round and Round

another Lipogram attempt - using only one vowel :)

the length 

the strength 

the stretch 

the fetch 

the schlepp

the dreg

the depth 

the specks

he spends 

the trends

she mends

the ends

she wench 

he wrench 

the stench 

the stent

he’s twelfth 

she’s tenth 

we tempt 

Benny Bent

the bergs 

the bells 

the beck’s 

the blets

he brews

she chews

we crew

we creep

we feck 

we feel 

we reel 

and steel 

we wheel 

we wheel 

we wheel 

we wheel 

Reviews

[hardeep sabharwal]

its so different, and I like the rhythm and enjoyed it, just awesome

[MAC]

feels like an old Sinatra or Martin song.......PERFECT! gives my night a little jingle :)

[emmajoy]

' he spends - the trends - she mends - the ends ' in any form sets me flying.
Brilliant, stylish crazy, rhythmic, mind-mesmeric and my, my.. a test passed with flying colours, dear you!

[AaronFreitas]

I cant even imagine how difficult it was to write this! Awesome work and I love how you not only followed format, but you created a great write! Good work :)

[Rinzin Samdup]

OK!! but it is quite hi5 for me to understand. Love ya rhythm though .

[Autumn Lyric]

well done...read smoothly throughout and amazing efforts on the one vowel attempt. Wow!

[SAYED THANGAL]

[t so rhythmic to sing, i downloaded it for students to sing, well done
sayed

[cycy]

he spends
the trends
she mends
the ends

very interesting piece you got here darl...

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Very well done, KWP. Sounds very good. :) Rudi

[KWP]

well it wasn't that thought out - but anyhoo :) thankyou X

[R Smith]

sounds like you had a lot of fun Oz Queen it really trips off the tongue, I spotted an 'A' is that allowed? You always make my day XXX

[KWP]

oh trust you to find one ..... maybe it was a test ?

love ya oh lovely boss man X