Hitch Hiker with Intention

... oh just allowing my mind right of passage ...

I open my heart 

to the distant whispers of love that

hitch hike through eternity 

seeking a momentary perch 

with souls whom welcome light

the caress of the whispers 

lead me into abandon

my interior, exterior, 

flesh, thought, moments, heartbeats, 

feeling, emotion and ideas - dishevel 

caressing the me 

it’s ok to fade

there’s no need to be 

the whispers clasp my hand 

I drift,

I crumble, come apart, disband 

I am carried along in the

winds of time 

I atomise 

I disunite

to reunite 

with whence I came 

I am a hitch hiker and I  offer 

the sweetest whispers of love …..

Reviews

[sinNsincerity]

Love, hitch hiker! OMG I'm dead!

[andrew mitchell]

lovely imagery, what a splendid write from a skilled splendid writer!

[Autumn Lyric]

Thank you for sharing...very strong write with great imagery and lines to make one think...

[Willard Wells]

Very nice piece and I enjoyed it. Between the title and the words I see a young woman hopping from ride to ride in love looking for the right one.

[daninstockholm]

I like this a lot!! Good images and well done in every sense! You did break what I was told was a rule and it always drives me up the wall,, I'll be happy to tell you in a pm if you wish,, but I like this one a lot either way!

[KWP]

always up for learning something new and workshopping it ... go on message away

[Valentine]

O.K. to fade...no need to be????? With God all things are possible and all have a purpose. It is up to us to find it. Valentine

[KWP]

depends how you interpret god and life I suppose :) but it is ok to fade ... then flow on I feel ... much love X

[Inject Positivity]

One of the most perfect poem I have ever seen.....Thanks Elizabeth mam.....

[DirectTangent]

I come away with a sense of how impermanent we are - the constant exchange of mass and energy - some arriving others departing. But there is a permanence to love which expresses itself as it catches a ride with us. That's just me - you had images running through my head.
Thank you for this. Causes me to stop and ponder.

[KWP]

perfectly read and for this I thank you - yay X

[The Twin Arenas]

sounds like the voice of a hawk reincarnated
"perch" always makes me think of birds
and i like the idea of them coming back as hitchhikers.
do with that what you will.

[KWP]

I shall take it and fly - cheers bud X

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i used to have this reckless abandon...offering love a ride, knowing it was probably temporary....some rode longer than others...but in the end...here i am, driving alone...on a highway of freedom....not that i wouldn't pick up just one more.

[KWP]

yeah when we were growing up my dad would pick people up all the time - us three kids would have to squish over and make way for some random stranger - those were the good old days - cheers Jacob X