Edbert Engages Ethel

I had the task of writing a LIPOGRAM ...

Edbert earned Ethel 

Esteeming Ethel’s everywhen

The screaming effervescence 

When she deemed herself Edbert’s friend.

Edbert revelled the next expect,

Expecting Ethel to X X X 

Edbert’s expects sexy sex 

Lest, she leave the nest.

Ethel screeched when Edbert expelled

His every, every, every, ever,

Extracting her excitement,

‘EEEEEEEEEE’ said she, with ecstatic glee.

She intended be Edbert’s whenever.

Author's Note

Choose one vowel and write a poem in which you can’t use words with any other vowels!

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Oh what a concept.....KWP=TALENT once again.....I will try this myself.....Thank you Mam....

[DirectTangent]

Crafty. Very interesting notion.
Using "u" as the vowel has got to be quite the challenge with this exercise.
Witty, playful, all 'round very appealing.

[KWP]

oooh how do you know I love a chellenge - using a u u say ... hmmm I will try my best - cheers for reading X

[cycy]

wow very interesting excercise missy..i love how you always try something new and totally just go for it and nail it. lovely indeed,,enjoyed reading this one this its a bit of a twister too lolx

[KWP]

hey there you :) yeah thanks it was fun - you should try one - it takes you where you don't expect - much appreciated as always always always X

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Wow, must be difficult. Never seen one. Well done, KWP. :) Rudi

[Autumn Lyric]

Wow! what a challenge. Nice work.

[Willard Wells]

Nicely done, but just the concept hurts my head.

[andrew mitchell]

Very clever, not as easy as one looks. Well done!

[Valentine]

EEEEK...a clever twist put to task. Valentine

[ANTO]

ya eke'd this one out nicely KwP.
what a melter...
:D

[KWP]

cheers bud ... was a gun and interesting task ... still not sure if I did it right X

[ANTO]

I only saw one nit. - better than I could have done.
Im thinking of a style called the Belfast Senryu style - same as ordinary senryu but has to be funny and has to have a little drinky mentioned in it. lol
wot u fink?

[KWP]

ha - I think that is a great new / ageold style :) hit me with one - then I will give it a shot (of whisky)

[ANTO]

My pint of stout gone
Huge creamy white smile on the face
of Nick McGuinness

[ANTO]

*huge cream white smile on the face (for proper syllability)

[KWP]

ha - ok - even got the visual

[KWP]

Give me another
Mornin' me passed-out brother
The next round was his

[ANTO]

You nailed it - as an X-Factor judge would say 'KwP you made it your own'
lol

[ANTO]

get out you are barred
no one licks spills on my bar
I dont do freebies

[KWP]

hahahaha - too good - and ewww what a picture X

[ANTO]

Oooh - I have seen worse... *dry wretches*

[KWP]

oi you drunken git
don't mess with that wee lady
that's my lovely maam

[ANTO]

hah hah - brilliant - another true one...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very clever..eeeeeeeeeee for enterteinment!
:)