Nothing More Than A Passing Moment

and something different ... looking forward to your thoughts

smoking a cigarette 

naked and alone 

wide awake at three am

lying in the silence of my bed 

screaming voices in my head

stone cold, frozen 

feeling naught

stuck

in a moment 

chastising 

everything in existence 

notably myself 

I allowed him passage 

within 

caught up  in the whirlwind of lust 

he took control 

hard 

fast 

over 

goodbye 

perched on the toilet 

for as long as it was going to take 

to pee out 

him

his taste 

his smell

his experience 

I wipe away 

our relations that 

were never meant to amount to 

anything more

than this thought 

Author's Note

been reading some Robert Creely

Reviews

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Well now, this is an attention getter :) I say read more Creely hahaha Strong< raw and damn good piece of work, my dear!

[KWP]

cheers lovely - glad you like it - I am interested in hearing the woman's perspective

[wordman]

we go through life seeking,looking for something to hold on to
it`s always the wrong thing that we find,love is blind
sex only a temporary stay,and we shower and start a new day,anew freedom that we hardly ever find.

[KWP]

ahh nicely put Wordman XX

[ANTO]

Robert Creely - wait til I see him - corrupting our KwP - whats Gaia gonna say - on second thoughts she probably say - Go Girl ! Be yourself and be a strong version of yourself while you're at it. This si certainly a strong gritty, heck , Aussie shiela write - no BS and knows what makes her happy and what to jettison. Welcome back! Nice avatar pic too KwP.

[KWP]

PS - I don't smoke ... X

[KWP]

oh and He Man - that bought back memories ... hahahaha X

[ANTO]

He wood (would - lol)

[KWP]

ahahhhhhhaaaaaaaa !

[Willard Wells]

You know I have not read a lot of your work and you not a lot of mine, but yes there is some connection. The first part was the connection I really felt the awake in the dark at 3 AM. Mind running high speed and high octane lust. Or "I was not looking for a meaningful relationship, just a shallow 5 minutes". Nice finish. You are a take what you want kind of woman and enjoys her roll. Maybe not?? :) Thank you.

[KWP]

I just read a couple pf your peoms and now I understand what you are saying - yes - it's an understanding - a viewing of the world with naked eyes - this poem above - just trying something different - a new perspective - inspired by Robert Creely X

[Willard Wells]

I find inspiration from some others work also. It just seems to trigger something. Of course sometimes the results to not match the original intent.

It seems to find a different path of it's own in the journey through my hallways and down to my finger tips. You find a "Y" in the road and suddenly your words are unique even to you.

[KWP]

yup ... that's it :) X