A Wanton Seduction

oooh I have not written a POEM in so long ... man it feels good ..... :) HELLO WORLD !!

i have a secret 

one I have kept to myself 

for a long, long time

but now I find

I am 

bursting 

busting

billowing

I need to share 

this secret 

with 

YOU !

where do I start 

with the

lust?

desire?

the excitement 

right there 

at the base of my spine?

it’s true 

I have formed a rather 

desperate 

attraction

it has smothered 

my 

senses

sensibilty

my soul

this seduction

has gathered me up 

warmed me from

the inside out 

the outside in 

gives me shivers at the 

very thought of being 

within me

as I 

swallow 

gasp 

sigh 

when the pleasure 

reaches such an intensity 

I burst complete

relinquish control 

float in the ripples

wade in the luxury 

and sink 

yes sink 

into the arms of my truest love 

he goes by the name of 

LIFE

Reviews

[wordman]

life can be great,it touches your seances it brightens your heart and soul
it touches the core

[Einstein Noodle]

i love the title!! hooked and inflamed me instantly ...
i thought the ending would be poetry .. but you surprised me with "LIFE" ..the whole nine yards :) i must secretly confess to you now tho .. i wanted it to be me
how interesting you give life a masculine identity .. ;)
love and peace Ms. K
E.

[KWP]

well if you think about it LIFE contains the everywhen - even you ;) and yes masculine ... what can I say I tend to swing towards the male side of life rather naturally XX LOVE right back gorgeous one XXX

[Einstein Noodle]

;) ..........

[guy drori]

It's starts out mysetrious and then the more you write the more it reveals details. I liked your line breaks which fit the poem. Nice job ! Though just a small piece of advice... it best to begin with a capital letter at the beginning of a new sentence. It make seem like a small detail but it makes a huge difference :)

[KWP]

thanks for your thoughts - I admit I hardly ever use capitals in my poetry anymore - for me it's more about the flow and I find capitals rather jutting - especially for this poem about life - life is a definite flower dont you think :) - thank Guy - I appreciate your thoughts very much XX

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wow! This took me down a waterfall with refracted sunlight and the glow of fern, echoing bird song and sweet smelling damp and then dumped my at the bottom amongst the rocks of the pool at the most unexpected ending.

[KWP]

ooh I got a visual of those rooks at the bottom of the pool - crystal clear water, fishy's swimmin' by, sun pushing it's way through the water ... I may come join you :D XX

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed an enticing thought lol!

[ANTO]

I love the playfulness of this - Any lover would be bowled over to be described in such deeply felt terms. Can Life smile - because Im sure he-she is smiling from from birth to release. The greatest of unselfish lovers this LIFE person and a more matched lover I never met than our KwP.
Excellent grin-inducing feel-good writing my friend.

[KWP]

grin inducing ahh well thats good my job here is done ... hey how bout this that I thought of just now ... Be like and orgasm - release - let go :) XX

[ANTO]

Yes - much more energy released than used - I love it. Einstein mustn't have factored love into his equations xD

[Ana B.]

A lovely pondering......i loved the ballet with life and all that is in between. A stunning write :)

[KWP]

ballet with life - as well as a bit of break dancin' too :) thanks Ana - lovely to see you XX

[sereenaoutloud]

AND she is BACK...dam girlie this is stunning a love affair with life. You built it up so well i did not expect the ending. I really love this KWP.

[KWP]

hey chick chick why thankeeeee ... yeah I love life ... caresses me in all the right places - oh yes yes ... love ya X