A Wanton Seduction

oooh I have not written a POEM in so long ... man it feels good ..... :) HELLO WORLD !!

i have a secret 

one I have kept to myself 

for a long, long time

but now I find

I am 

bursting 

busting

billowing

I need to share 

this secret 

with 

YOU !

where do I start 

with the

lust?

desire?

the excitement 

right there 

at the base of my spine?

it’s true 

I have formed a rather 

desperate 

attraction

it has smothered 

my 

senses

sensibilty

my soul

this seduction

has gathered me up 

warmed me from

the inside out 

the outside in 

gives me shivers at the 

very thought of being 

within me

as I 

swallow 

gasp 

sigh 

when the pleasure 

reaches such an intensity 

I burst complete

relinquish control 

float in the ripples

wade in the luxury 

and sink 

yes sink 

into the arms of my truest love 

he goes by the name of 

LIFE

Reviews

[sinNsincerity]

What a excellent write. I enjoyed the tempo. It got hot in here for a moment. =D

[Ruth]

Oh wow!!! Love this so much...needed a positive boost and this a dose of medicine :) xo

[andrew mitchell]

shhhh! Don't blow my cover KWP! we discussed our wanton desires of each other in words and now I expand myself to life lol. Great write Kwp jokes aside!!!

[KWP]

Well I we had to come out from hiding sooner rather than later right ? Now my Love my Life we have done just that X

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

A poem with a twist at the end. Very well done, KWP, I like it very much. :) Rudi

[jacob erin-cilberto]

surprise ending...but yes, having a passion for life....making love to each day, feeling the warm embrace of time...making the best use of our time on earth...there is a certain sensuality to that, i believe.

wonderful piece of poetry...love the analogy you have created.

[The Twin Arenas]

You know what they say....it's long and tremendous.

[KWP]

hahaha - and I will interpret that in whichever way I fancy thank you X

[~]

The best way to go! Trifling, teasing, flirting life with a passion that never ends.. life is good!!

[R Smith]

a truly wonderful poem (bet there were a few out there hoping to see their name at the end haha) the end could hardly be more appropriate, you display a great desire for life already and now we have it in words so brilliantly written and don't let it be so long before you write again or i'll send the.....whatever police round, there must be someone to control wayward writers lol Now get into my library! XXX

[KWP]

oooooohhhhhh you want me in your library - how could I refuse ??? I will meetcha in the reference section ... right there by Ram Dass ;)

[R Smith]

Well that's a date i can't refuse, imagine the things we can enjoy, from the wonderful Ram Dass, just as good as that ledge I reckon XXX

[KWP]

i will bring coffee and Mala beads .... ;) X

[R Smith]

love coffee, what can i bring? X

[KWP]

The universe within you ....

[R Smith]

That's a good one, you too then we'll have parallel universes ^_^ XXX

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Coming from someone who heated death last year this poem touches me deeply.

[KWP]

thanks you - nice to know you are still here playing the game with the rest of us - much love X

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh yeah still here... always great seeing you here.

[Emily]

I love it!
You had me questioning what this secret is.
Keep it up!